"The Vampire Prince"
By: fuzzypaws123

☠Cover: 3/5- The cover is okay, but I feel it should deal more with the title. I hear "The Vampire Prince" I think of a sexy vampire and a human. So maybe something like a hot, mysterious couple.

☠Description: 10/10- The description is awesome, I love it. Normally I don't read vampire books, but this seems interesting and very intriguing.

☠Grammar & Punctuation: 18/10- Very good grammar and punctuation both. There were a few mistakes throughout the chapters I read but not an overload. I love how your sentences are structured, Utah makes it an easy and enjoyable read.

☠Originality: 5/5- You took a typical vampire story and gave it your own twist and ideas. I like the originality of it, it's different from the rest.

☠Character Development: 18/20- Good description of your characters. The comparison between the two main characters heights stood out in the beginning. It helps to visualize the characters. The first chapter should include a physical description of Aline. I love her character, she's very relatable.

☠Plot Development: 19/20- Great pace for your plot, it flows very nicely and you keep it in the same tense. First question I had from the beginning was, did her friend set her up to be attacked by using the love Aline has for her brother? From the first chapter is has mystery. Emotions are felt throughout the chapters. Everything does happen fast, but it works with the story.

☠Overall Look: 10/10- I like how it's centered and not aligned on the left like every story I've read. That causes it to be visually appealing. I also like how you use all caps when Aline screams, it shows the 'loudness' of her scream and enhances it.

☠Enjoyment: 10/10- I rarely like this type of book so I was shocked that I enjoyed it like I did. I will definitely finish it once I get my reviews caught up.

☠ Total:
93/100
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*110 points*

♥Sorry this is late sweetie, I've had it completed for a few days but it's taken me a bit to get it posted. ♥