"The Last Kiss"
By: kings_1

💋Cover: 5/5- I love the cover! I like how you made it look like a movie poster, it's awesome. The background pictures blend well with the main picture. It's very sexy.

💋Description: 8/10- The description is good as it is. However, it is jumbled. Try expanding it a bit more and including a quote from the book to pull readers in even quicker.

💋Grammar & Punctuation: 15/20-
There are some missing punctuation at the end of speeches that characters make. A few run on sentences makes some paragraphs jumbled. You can use some commas all throughout the first five chapters. I saw some grammatical mistakes as well. When a character is in thought use italics, not quotations. Quotations mean the word aww spoken out loud.

💋Originality: 5/5- I like your plot and how you add your own idea and twists to make this type of story your own. Your originality is very creative.

💋Character Development: 17/20-
I like the characters. They are unique and have their own identities. They have that attraction still even though in the past they were step siblings that doesn't stop their feelings. I would add a little more about each of their physical looks and have them grow more deeper towards the end of the book.

💋Plot Development: 18/20- There are a couple plot holes and a couple questions let open. But I've not finished the book so everything may unfold by the end. The plot is developing well and at a good pace. I like how you stay in the same tense, it makes it easier to read.

💋Overall Look: 8/10- It has a good look. It needs proper grammar and punctuation. Great spacing in the paragraphs but you need to break up the run on sentences.

💋Enjoyment: 8/10- I really enjoyed reading, The Last Kiss. I will definitely finish this book. I'm glad you update often because this will be one i get hooked on.

💋Total: 84/100
+ 5 for following me

89 points!

*Video with this review is "We Ride" By Gucci Mane and Monica because it reminds me of you and the beautiful -Milkbiscuits- and my husband always sings me this song! ♥♥♥