"Lost In Time"
"Lost In Time"
By: FateofReckoning
💎Cover: 5/5- The cover is simply awesome! I love how the road, clock and lightening all blend together. It is visually stunning which makes the cover excellent, best cover I've saw in a long time. I can see the hard work, time and dedication in the cover.
💎Description: 10/10- Great description of your novel. It includes the perfect amount of information to make me want to click read and get lost in your story. I love how you include a sample from the book as well, it allows a small glimpse into what I will be reading.
💎Grammar and Punctuation: 20/20-
The grammar and punctuation both are flawless. I love a good book, but a good book with perfect grammar and punctuation is even better. Lost In Time is very well put together and a wonderful addition to my library on here.
💎Originality: 5/5- 100% original! This book is definitely unique and brew from a creative mind. I applaud your creativity and originality to create such a masterpiece as this. If this novel is ever published in paperback (or hardback) I will for sure purchase a copy for my personal library at home. To have such a novel in my collection would be a wonderful addition.
💎Character Development: 20/20-
I truly love Stella! She is a strong female lead, which many books lack. Most books,even those written by females (including myself) sometimes have the lead female be dependable upon a male and appear weaker than the opposite sex. Stella is the opposite! She is strong, independent and determined to get revenge. I love her character very much.
💎Plot Development: 18/20- The plot is extremely well written. It flows perfectly, which is definitely a positive. Keeping up with two different lives, one being Stella in the past and then Stella in the future is very pleasant to read. They both flow together wonderfully, yet are strong alone. One hiccup I did find in the story, which is an important part, is HOW Stella transports back into time. We aren't told how it works, if it happens automatically or if she has to do something for the transportation to take place. I didn't understand it until it happens during chapter six. So that's something I feel should be explained more clearly in am early chapter, so others aren't confused about it. Other than that the plot is absolutely perfect.
💎Overall Look: 10/10- I love the look of the book. Each chapter isn't too long or told short, they end at a perfect place as well. You asked for opinions on who should play Felix... ♥NICK BATEMAN♥! He first came to my mind. He's definitely handsome and fits the look. He can pull off today's look and as well as the look of the 1800's, to play his grandson (to whatever power) and as well as Felix himself.
💎Enjoyment: 10/10- I love this book so, so much!!! I am needing an update ASAP! It is so intriguing and attention grabbing. I really mean what I said about purchasing this if it's ever published. You should bring this to the attention of publishers everywhere. They will love it add much as I do! This deserves so many more reads. I will for sure be one to share your story. It is a privilege to read your works.
💎Total: 98/100
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*115 points*
♥The video with this review is by the awesome band Fall Out Boy! The song is The Ain't A Scene, It's An Arms Race♥
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Y'all go read Lost In Time by the extremely talented FateofReckoning
You will fall in love with this novel as I did.
*Thanks for asking for a review sugar💋*
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