“Can Hurt Heal”
By: Written_Voices34
hello_gurl34
SimplyBree318

🌹Cover: 5/5- Beautiful cover! The pic isn't like all other book covers, this is so unique.

🌹Description: 9/10- Awesome description as well. I would exit it some for grammar and punctuation. But it definitely pulled me into the story.

🌹Grammar & Punctuation: 18/20- There are a couple run on sentences that can be broken down into two sentences. When listing things, make sure to seperate them with a comma. The normal one person per paragraph but you haven't had time to edit so I won't count that off haha.

🌹Originality: 5/5- This story is very original, I love hearing about a family like this. It has love, family and mystery. Excellent job girls.

🌹Character Development: 18/20- Good job with the characters! Instead of listing LaNyiah's features make them appear through words. Show don't tell. As always, I LOVE your character names and your support for thicker women.

🌹Plot Development: 19/20-The plot jumps off from the first sentence and leads into an excellent plot. Try to do flashbacks in italics, so it doesn't blend in with the rest of the story.

🌹Overall Look: 8/10- It's a tad jumbled in some spots but it looks great. The cover really adds a perk to the book.

🌹Enjoyment: 10/10- Absolutely freaking wonderful. So far this is my favorite book of all the ones I've read by you ladies.

🌹Total: 92/100
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109 Points ♥

♥As always thanks for requesting a review, hello_gurl34
I appreciate you for so much sis. I love ya big time. ♥