Rachellipson01

C O V E R

9 - 10

I looooved this cover, it had that beautiful fantastical element and it was designed in such an elegant. Personally, I believe it was the perfect cover for your book, and whoever created it should be very proud of themselves!

O R I G I N A L I T Y / P L O T

6 - 10

So, this was one of those overused plots. However it was one of those plots that never die, and always have something new to bring to the table. You were able to spin the tale of a lost princess with something new - a modern twist.

However, there were points that lacked originality. For example, the fact that all the girls acted differently when they saw the boys, and only the MC saw them in a  negative light. This annoyed me as it catered to the stereotypical tonight that all girls are obsessed with boys except the MC, who is immune to their charms.

Other than that though, everything was good. I thought that you kept many original themes in your book and your interesting plot shone throughout.

SPaG

9 - 10

I could barely see any mistakes in your book, which shows the amount of editing and the care you have for your book. It was clear throughout that you had checked over completely and correctly.

D E T A I L S / D E S C R I P T I O N S

9 - 10

I thought your descriptions were excellent, as I was able to know and understand what was going on completely throughout the story. I could easily imagine how the two princes looked, who Mia was, where she came from, etc, because of the amount of detail and time you put in to ensure every reader could visualize what was going on.

It was done beautifully and artfully, and is surely a talent you should never lose.

P R E S E N T A T I O N

7 - 10

I liked your presentation. I felt like your layout was really neat and I thought your change lengths were perfect. Your dialogue was written correctly and the little questions at the end were super cute and got readers involved.

O V E R A L L

40 - 50