HillbillieNolan

d i s c l a i m e r :

Because this is a poetry book, it will be judged on using a different criteria.

C O V E R

5 - 10

Although your cover did capture the essence of peace and tranquillity your book is about, it wasn't enough to hold me in such a way that begged me to click on your book. That is something extremely important in getting more readers to check out your book. Also, add your title and your name to the cover, so people immediately know what your poetry is about and who it's by.

O R I G I N A L I T Y

7 - 10

I liked the uniqueness in your poems, they were different to the usual poems out there. "Damage" was a particularly moving piece of art, and while love is typically used as a theme in many poems, your "Love is like..." poem was very thought provoking and was delivered really well.

C R E A T I V I T Y

9 - 10

I found your work to be very creative, they effectively showed your endless thoughts and ideas, which was the point of the your book, and was very helpful in getting people to think about all the little things in life.  Clearly, you spent a lot of time on these, which shows how much very single piece of work meant to you, which is the mark of a true poet.

SPaG

10 - 10

There were virtually no mistakes in the first three poems I read, which shows the amount of editing you must have done. It allowed for a smooth read, with readers able to grasp the full concept of your book, without being held back by small spelling or punctuation errors. Well done!

S T R U C T U R E

8 - 10

I liked your structure, I liked how it didn't follow a particular pattern, and how there was a variety of sentences lengths. It was organised, yet didn't follow the usual trend which was good. There could be more stanzas to split your poems up a little, and to straighten things up. However they are your poems, and the structure you have for them can be any way you wish them to be.

O V E R A L L

41 - 50