Marine_Life_101

C O V E R

1- 10

This is only such a low score because you do not have a cover at the moment. Therefore these points will not be counted in your total score as that it is unfair. I would recommend requesting at a cover shop on wattpad or testing your skills and creating one yourself. Your cover is one of the main reasons why people click on your book and is therefore is VERY important.

O R I G I N A L I T Y / P L O T

6 - 10

I feel like this was a typical girl meets boy, and they fall in love at first sight book, and therefore lacks much originality. However, maybe things are a little too perfect, and there's probably things that may get in the way of their relationship, which would make your book a little more unique. ALSO I loved how Lizzy wasn't your usual teenager, she wasn't the nerd or the quiet one people most often write about. She was adventurous and outgoing, which was pretty great to see. Normally, in stories, it's the boy who can't wait to explore the world, and the girl who is introverted, and just likes life how it is now. So I loved how it was the complete opposite in this book, as it highlights more originally in your book, and showed you had put thought into creating your characters.

S P A G

6.5 - 10

This was good, I noticed a few mistakes though. Your first chapter was virtually mistake free, but on chapter 2 and 3 there were a few mistakes here and there. Nothing major through, and nothing that can't be easily fixed.

D E T A I L S  /  D E S C R I P T I O N S

10- 10

I LOVED your descriptions, they were all so beautiful and wonderfully written. As this book is set in the country, it's so important for the reader to be able to visualise how everything looks like and where everything is, and you did that perfectly. I could see the world your characters were in from the beginning, and that takes serious talent. If people need help with descriptions/ detail, I'd definitely recommend you to them. Well done, this was amazing!! ♥

P R E S E N T A T I O N

7- 10

This was good, I liked how your chapters were quite chunky and provided a lot of information. However, I think you should have had more of a range, so some small paragraphs and some big, to make it seem a little more well laid out. Also, your chapters were quite short, so if they were a little longer, it would improve the presentation greatly. Other than that, I liked your presentation and thought it was very well put together.

O V E R A L L

29.5 - 40