One thing to point out, while it does have grammar mistakes, the author is trying really hard to improve upon their writing. I respect that.

Second of all, the story is immersive, the small details make the story as well. While it doesn't have a lot of chapters (which is understandable because of inspiration and creativity), it makes up for it's word count which is longer than some of my own stories! I love how (spoilers) Eri and Izuku play and love each other. It gets all fluff and cute~!

Finally, wherever they take this story is up to them. A fanfic is not a fanfic about the readers, rather then the author's imagination. We as readers of their story can only give them insight of where to take that story.

Now for the rating...

9/10

Author of the story: ALIVE_00

I cannot express how much you have done for taking an idea that popped into your mind and create it into a reality. I love your book! I hope to see more chapters! Flying by, FoolishAngel.

Note: It is an IzuMomo story.