The Butterflies by @SilentNatureWriter

First off, SilentNatureWriter - the cover!!!

Main Image - Very Demure when I see it personally. It really attracted me to read it and definitely got my attention. Did you draw this yourself? If so, a big applause to you for this talent!!! 👏 If not, we'll, you have a really good taste for a cover! I'm going to need to learn from you myself. 9/10

Title - As it is a book I don't advise going Cursive of the title since some readers (or maybe a lot, if I'm not mistaken) can't read cursive, so this could drop off the cover a bit. But as it matches with the main cover a lot, don't change it to formal font. I advise that you make the title a bit bigger and less cursive. 7/10

Description!!

I couldn't get into the website so I had to screenshot it on my phone, in which the text is a lot more tinier, sorry about that!

It's a really emotional description and has gotten me teary. Amazing work! 8/10

Now late dwell into the story!!

First Impressions on Chapter 1 - I haven't thought about what kind of book it was until I actually read it. It seems like it doesn't have much of an actual plot, just a lot of thoughts put into words, so that really caught me off gaurd. But as I gone through, it felt more like a motivational speech, the long ones that famous people start with a class filled with people of all ages.

But now I need to say that this is not a narrative so I can't really judge it. But it's a good therapy book at the very least.

It's been such a great experience reading your book and I hope to find more just as, or even more, interesting books out there. But for now, I'll have to make a limit:

I don't allow any works that are not narratives for me to judge. I might accept it personally but I wouldn't be actually judging it.

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