Title: You Must Remember This
Author: @FranklinBarnes
Chapters read: 15
Overall score: 45/50

Cover/title/blurb -4/5
Grammar and spelling - 9/10
Detail - 9/10
Plot -10/10
Originality - 4/5
Flow of story -4/5
Overall enjoyment -5/5
Total - 45/50

The review is based on the first 5 chapters of the book only!

Cover 5
There's a lot going on here, maybe opt for something a little bit simpler. The lettering could be a bit bigger and the name of the author like in a printed book would be written on the front too. 3

Title 5
It grabs at the readers. Making me want to find out what must be remembered and why it is important, And bonus for it being an original title. 5

Blurb 5
It's good. Tells the reader what the plot is about. If possible make it a little longer maybe with some quote from the book to drag the attention to the writing style within? 4

Detail 10
There's a lot of detail. Try making some long sentences into two shorter ones. And in certain parts not all the detail is necessary. To leave it to the reader's imagination a little bit.

In certain parts there's a word repetition like in ch3 you use otherwise twice in one sentence. Why not either cut it in half (the sentence) or substitute the word with something else.

In certain parts (not many) but I felt like the detail given wasn't relevant. Or rather i as a reader didn't see the connection as to why am I told this.
9

Plot 10
It follows teens at their usual school life and drama. At least to the point I have read it. It's a simple idea executed really well. 10

Originality 5
The way this book is written is very interesting and original when it comes to Wattpad.

A question I do have is who are you writing it for? Is it teens? Is it 18+? Who's the audience? From the setting I'd say young adult/teens but from the language of the book I'm not sure. 4

Flow of story 5
The story flows very neatly. Every part of the book gives the reader vivid details of what's going on. Tells us and shows us about the characters. Transition between different parts within chapters is very smooth. The dialogue realistic. Every part of the story brings the characters to life and makes them relatable in some ways. 5

Overall enjoyment 5
I enjoyed it very much. It is a harder book to read for someone who has not had the pleasure to read a book written like this one. It has got a lot of big fancy words that might put some Wattpad readers off. Or confuse them, especially the younger audience. But for me personally, loved it. 5