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Book : Touch me like you do

Writer : sidneetxjini_mini

Reviewer : SidneetLovers

Review Editing : Not needed

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꧁REVIEW꧂

✑ First Impression

The story's first Impression was fine. Just that the character sketch could have been improved by adding pictures or making a college.

✑ Cover

I liked the cover a lot. The beautiful background and font colour makes it quite elegant and attractive. I love the thing that it's kept simple, with just one picture of the main leads.

✑ Title

The title is quite good, it's not like other titles which are used more widely.

✑ Prologue/blurb

After reading the prologue, I was a little confused, whether the boy and the girl are same in every situation but it still attracted me to read the story.

✑ Plot idea

The plot idea is good, but I cannot see the prologue's part anywhere in the story.

✑ Description

The prologue is given in description, already told about it.

✑ Character development

The characters can be improved, its told that siddharth and Avneet are arrogant too, but they haven't behaved like that in the story.

✑ Writing Style

The language can be improved, by using prepositions where they're necessary. But I like thw fact that the story contains both English and Hindi. Some parts seriously made me laugh, I love that thing and I am expecting the same in future.

✑ Suggestions

While adding a picture, pinterest is a better option than taking screenshots. If you don't get what you want then definitely taking screenshots is helpful. The language can be inproved a little, by using more advanced words. The language is indeed a very important thing in the story, good language attracts more readers. I myself improving it.

✑ Overall review

Overall the story is very great. I love it a lot. The cover is very nice, along with the prologue. The plot is attractive and catchy, and your ideas are pretty well. The story is beautiful in its own wat. If I would've been asked to give marks, it's 89/100 from my side!

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