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▪︎▪︎3rd Review▪︎▪︎

Book : Sidneet One Shots

Writer : Zemaira123

Reviewer : sidneetxcutie

Review Editing : Host of the book

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꧁REVIEW꧂

✑ First Impression

It was good for one shots. Nothing much to say with this.

✑ Cover

First thing, I personally loved it a lot. It is perfect for this book so no change.

✑ Title

If we talk about book title then you too know that it is a simple one but if we go for shots one then they were pretty good and some what attractive for readers to read.

✑ Prologue/blurb

As it is one shot, no prologue that is obvious.

✑ Plot idea

Ideas are working well with the readers as I personally loved them but if we state facts then I will definitely choose Vampire one as I loved reading it a lot. So you keep going with your mind on this book.

✑ Description

You give description of the emotions which is good but it would be more helpful for readers to understand if you use some shorts of brackets.

✑ Character development

One shot so not one character or one story line so it is carried out well.

✑ Writing Style

The way you write is working but not for new readers somewhere as the first thing it will be noticed that you are writing emotions or you can say expressions of your character in their dialogues so it would be better if you write them in brackets as it will be easy for readers to understand as they firstly take those words into dialogues. I hope you got this point.

✑ Suggestions

As said just work with those expression with brackets as that is one negative point in your writing skill which eventually decrease new readers to read further.

✑ Overall review

If we see overall view then everything is good but one cant just erase that negative point which is noticed first by any one in books. And one tip by review editor that the way of your writing matters a lot in your books because the better you write, the better one can imagine.

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