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▪︎▪︎5th Review▪︎▪︎

Book : Relationships

Writer : Sidneetia

Reviewer : NovaQueen30

Review Editing : by Host

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꧁REVIEW꧂

✑ First Impression

The start was all way good but somewhere i thought that it would be a simple one with little misunderstanding.

✑ Cover

Cover is personally loved by me a lot. The cover surely defines the title very well and i would really love to know that how you made it.

✑ Title

Is so simple one but elegant. The word says a lot and your story is surely working with it as the story is all about the relationships between the characters of your book.

✑ Prologue/blurb

You tried your best to write it all way good but it requires a little bit of modification and some type of symbols for differentiating the scenes.

✑ Plot idea

As you have thought a lot of twist which is pretty good one but some short of more explanation is required for making it all way perfect and presentable.

✑ Description

It is nice which have questions for readers to think as they have to think what you want them to think over it.

✑ Character development

You are going in development of characters slowly understanding everything well. Talking ways are developed well.

✑ Writing Style

Your way of writing is different and good too. Anyone can easily understand what you meant with your words which is quite fascinating. But you surely try to focus on main plot and characters lines which is quite ok.

✑ Suggestions

Being honest i would love to tell that you surely requires some short of modification in prologue as mentioned earlier and it would be better if you dont say all the things together as little space and digestion is required for readers to fit it in mind for a particular story.

✑ Overall review

Book is overall going smoothly with sense and the management is well by your side which is nice and if we talk about some shorts of changes then prologue surely require some change as that will be your second impression for a reader after entering the book.

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