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▪︎▪︎25th Review▪︎▪︎

Book : Lust Becomes Love

Writer : Alone_king16

Reviewer : Rapunzel_0207

Review Editor : Host

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꧁REVIEW꧂

✑ First Impression

I loved the story. Its youthful and a mystery story. It created the curiosity in readers of what is happening next.

✑ Cover

The cover is so attractive and is designed well. It shows sassy nature and a Mysterious theme. It attracts readers but I would like to suggest that cover can be made with little more opacity and brightness, as it will add some shine in it.

✑ Title

It has both positive and negative impact. The title defines the story very well, as it shows that love changed the person in a good way, though it is a long and enduring journey so the title is an apt one.

✑ Prologue/blurb

Its a curious one. It defines that physical appearance may envy for many and even lusted by people  which may give impact of people who think they won't look good or something. But at last the love wins and it is showed in sid and reem's life very well.

✑ Plot idea

It is really good. Though it jas negativity in the starting of using girls, but the lead gets to know the power of love later on which he couldn't feel for others. It shows purity even if he realised lately and regretted that, "Make the most of your regrets; never smoother your sorrow, but tend and cherish it till it come to have a separate and integral interest. To regret deeply is to pive afresh." This quote suits the story.

✑ Description

The description is a curious one. It created a curiosity of will she accept him or not and also curious about the mistake he did. And lust on someone is obviously a negative thing but when a correct person enters in our life, everything changes and gets well and that's what we can find here.

✑ Character development

Characters are developed nicely without any hesitation whether it is positive or negative one, just like life. Like life you showed the negative too when required and they are maintained well without confusing readers.

✑ Writing Style

I loved the way you write. The clarity in writing and there are not much mistakes too. Simple, easy to understand and deep meanings and it is attractive to make readers stand on their toes untill the story completes.

✑ Suggestions

Fast updates are required, just to stick readers with the book as after long time update readers just get bored with the story and they leave. And a little big chapters too. I am waiting for the next update.

✑ Overall review

The concept, the content, the writing way, the description, cover, title and everything suits the story well. But quick updates are required.

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