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▪︎▪︎2nd Review▪︎▪︎

Book : koi tumsa nahi~ story of Rivals to lovers

Writer : sidneet13tr

Reviewer : sidneetxcutie

Review Editing : Host herself

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꧁REVIEW꧂

✑ First Impression

I personally loved it. Hindi translations were pretty good and Awesome, you can say.

✑ Cover

First thing is that i appreciate your efforts behind making the cover but from my side it was not that good but still your efforts are pointed behind your cover making from my side.

✑ Title

Title is pretty working with the story as still the story is not completed so still it is interesting that from where it came.

✑ Prologue/blurb

Prologue is creating suspense which is attracting readers to read the book. I liked it, the way you wrote it for this book.

✑ Plot idea

Idea is Amazing though a basic one or you say a common one. But the way you are pulling your story brings the spice in reading it.

✑ Description

Your prologue is Awesome which is quite good one so anyone can understand the story. And the way you describe is ok with the story. No need of changes as i see readers are all way adjusted with it.

✑ Character development

The way you are managing is perfect for the book. No need of changes as it is working nicely.

✑ Writing Style

The way you write is perfect. I liked it but i really want to tell you that dont use emojis as because no need of it (Your beloved friend's review just to tease you) everything is going well here also so no need of change.

✑ Suggestions

No suggestions as i liked the things the way it is. But yeah cover points are upto you.

✑ Overall review

Everything is pretty good and going well as per the story so no need to change anything as i loved each and every thing here. So the story and your writing skills are fitting here.

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