The F.A.F.A by @rikaaraji468

♫ cover/title: The title is quite interesting. I feel that you can give a better cover to your work. The present one is not so good. I suggest you change the cover, a good cover attracts more readers.

♫ blurb: The blurb is good and perfect. You can make it a bit long by adding a part of your work if you wish to. 

♫ grammar and spelling: There were some mistakes and I have pointed them out, then and there. You can delete the comments after you have changed them. Your grammar is good, there aren't many mistakes. In the last chapter which you have published up to date, there are some mistakes. Try editing it.

♫ plot: The plot is interesting. I have never read a plot like this, I don't read much of mystery/thriller. The cliffhanger you gave was awesome. I am dying to know what would happen next.

♫ detail: You have detailed your work very well. All the events and characters were realistic. Nice character development. 

♫ style and flow of story/ work: It's good. You have written your work in the present tense and there wasn't any tense mistake. Great job. 

♫ overall enjoyment: It was good. I loved spending time reviewing your work. And I am also sorry about the delay. After reading your work, I feel that I should try reading more mystery/thrillers.