𝕊𝕦𝕞𝕞𝕖𝕣 𝔻𝕣𝕖𝕒𝕞
Summer Dream by _handsome_bunnyB21_
♫ Cover/title: The cover is beautiful, it's bright and gives summer vibes. And the title is very apt to the cover. Your cover and title gives a positive vibe.
♫ Blurb: Your blurb is very short, it would be nice if you could add more elements to it.
♫ Grammar and spelling: There are some grammatical mistakes and spelling mistakes. They were mostly tense mistakes. And in some places, the sentence begins with a small letter. Reframing some of the sentences would be good.
♫ Plot: I liked the idea of your story, but it was really sad to know it was all a dream after all. Your work was short, sweet, and cheesy. Lovely work
♫ Detail: The third chapter felt very realistic, beautifully written, and explained every element.
♫ Style and flow: The flow was amazing. I did not realize it was a dream until the end, it was hard to believe even at the end.
♫ Enjoyment: It's a truly enjoyable work for new ARMY (s). It was a pleasure reviewing your work. Thank you.
I am extremely sorry for the delay, I was hooked up with a very tight schedule. I hope my review was helpful.
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