Celine by Tealover0669

Cover/title: The cover is unique and stylish in its own ways. The border used is cool. The font used is good.  The background highlights the fonts and the color and makes the cover eye-catching. According to me, I feel the spark above the girls head shows enlightenment, and her breast shows maturity (changing into a werewolf)

Blurb: The blurb is perfect. I couldn't find any mistakes. 

Grammar and spelling: You have written your story in present tense. It is like entering a lion's den. You have done a great attempt, but still, there are a few tense mistakes. These could be avoided with a bit of attention. And also, in one part of the work, you have written in first person's P.O.V and then you have suddenly jumped to third person's P.O.V. It would be nice if you mention P.O.V. 

Plot: Your plot is creative and adventurous. 

Detail: It would be nice if you add more details. You can detail how the village was, how Celine is, and many other things. 

Style and flow: Your choice of words is good. You have written all the chapters short and sweet with new things. One suggestion is to end your chapters in such a way that the next chapter holds suspense. It will make the readers want to read more and more.

Enjoyment: I truly enjoyed reviewing your work. It kept me occupied.

Thank you for asking me to review your work. Your work is great. Keep going. All the very best.