Title

The title is 'Loving a stranger', it really does spell it out for you. Clearly for the title, I can assume that the book involves the main character who has fallen in love with a stranger or has some kind of feelings for a stranger. I'm also guessing that the stranger doesn't feel the same way of maybe they're not acknowledging the feelings at all. This book is definitely going to involve romance, it might be a young adult book.

Book cover

The book cover is attractive as it instantly grabs my attention. You've included an image of a young couple who are looking out or gazing at the views of the mountains I think. You've included the title on the cover, the size and font of the title is appropriate as it stands out.

The font looks fancy but nice at the same time and suits the cover as it's related to romance. I like how you've included the small element of a pink heart on the cover, it adds a nice little touch and brightens it up. My only suggestion would be to try and use a better quality image as this one seems a little blurry and dull, however, apart from that, I quite like your book cover.

First chapter

The first chapter was not too bad, I was expecting a load of cliche writing but you proved me wrong. The first chapter portrays Porter and Lindsey as a couple almost until Porter begins going through his thoughts when Lindsey is asleep, that's when I figured out who the stranger is.  I did like the first chapter but I do feel like it was partially rushed at the end. It's like first he is with Lindsey and then he's ran off to work.

My suggestion for you would be to add some more detail in the first chapter, maybe something about Porter or Lindsey so the reader has some information but not too much because we don't want to get to know the characters too quickly in the first chapter.

Plot/themes

The plot seems extremely rushed and confusing, the first chapter was good and the book was going well until Porter goes to his office. After that, I genuinely don't have a clue what's going on even though I read it a few times to try and figure it all out. The theme in the book is definitely romance, I could sense that throughout all of the chapters so you've done good with that.

My feedback for you would be to ensure that you plan your plot properly before writing up your chapters and please take your time writing them and not rushing them because a reader can tell that you've rushed your work. Especially since you've only just begun the book, now is the best time to plan it properly and include all your ideas.

Writing style

Your writing style could do with improvement. You're able to form basic sentences and keep the plot moving with them, however, you're lacking with words which could strengthen your sentences and make your writing more enjoyable to read.

You've used some basic descriptive words in the chapters but I'm sure you can make progress with them words and upgrade them. By upgrading I mean using different words, a range of vocabulary and playing around with your sentences. Now would be the perfect time for you to experiment with your writing style and find what suits you, you need to be willing to change and make improvements within your work.

Characters

Porter comes across as a very shy character, someone who minds his own business and keeps himself to himself, however, it's like he has all these thoughts and comments trapped in his mind which is the cocky, confident side of him. I think it's cute that he has feelings for Lindsey but it seems like she's almost afraid to show her feelings towards him or even acknowledge the fact that he has feelings for her. Lindsey isn't really portrayed as anything in the book, she's just basically there living with Porter but we don't know anything about her at all. There's no emotion, personality or anything from her.

Overview

The book is in very much early days for me to judge it properly, I mean three written chapters is not much really so I can't form no judgement at all. I can say that there's a lot of work to be done with the book, mainly the plot development as that is the base of any book. You need to ensure you have a solid plot with all your ideas, try to make as original and creative as possible. Let your imagination do the work and let loose when writing. I think that once you've planned the plot and discovered your writing style, you'll be okay hopefully and be able to write more confidently.

Reviewed by: Pixie