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Morning

tejran first did pooja and then were busy in the prep...

At kk;s house

He was busy in doing the prep when kavya came full ready with omi

kav=papa..mai ready hu

kar=aare princess...itna simple dress kyu dala hai? Teri tabiyat theek hai na? Aare omi doc ko bula...

kav=papa.....relax....vo mai Taswi ke gahr ja rahi hu na..aur i mean vo itni rich nhi hai...aur mai uske birthday party mai ja rahi hu..toh isiliye simple look taki usko bura na lage..

And karan was so proud of her

kar=i am so proud of u my princess

Kavya smiled and went with omi

At teju's side

Teju =khana sab bangaya

She got a call from office....

teju=mai kaise aau aaj??chutti li hai maine..par..

She hung the call

taswi=kya hua matashree?

teja=wow..baby u look so beautiful

taswi=ha par aap phone pe.;..

teju=office bulaya hai urgently.....vo....

taswi=koi baat nhi matashree..aap jao..dadi dadu hai na...dont worry

teju=thanku..jaldi aane ka try karti hu ha mai..

And she left

In some time her friends came

taswi=aur ye meri bestie..Kavya..iska bhi birthday hai aaj

k.m/k.d=happy birthday

kav=thanku..um...um..

taswi=tum inhe dadi dadu hi bulao..chalega na?

k.d=bilkul

kav=ok dadu....dadi..

sani=kavya..itni simple kyu banke aayi hai

kav=a..aaise hi

taswi=tu yaha aa

She took her in side and hugged her

taswi=thanks...

kav=kyu?

taswi=muje pata hai ki tu simpel banke aayi hai taki muje bura na lage..

kav=aaisa kuch nhi hai...aab hamara same birthday hai toh hum sister hi hue na...

tas=yes..

Both hugged and went out

K,aajao khana khate hai

K.m and k.d were feeding taswi..

Kavya was seeing them with a smile...

k.m=aare bacha...aap bhi kuch khao na....aapne toh kuch liya hi nhi

kav=nhi vo..

taswi=aare dadi vo na iske bas papa hi hai..jo bohot protective hai.....toh vo zyada junk nhi khati

k.m=mai kuch aur banake lau?

kav=nhi dadi....vo aaj ek din mai kha sakti hu bas dawayi leni hogi muje...

k.d=toh chal ..mai khilata hu tuje aaj

He fed her

All smiled

k.m=teri dawayi...

kav=hmm(sadly)

K.m and k.d saw each other and brought gems...

k.m=pehele..ye..

All were having the gems..

When kavya mistakenly took the pill which was very small and gulped it

k.m=bacha..pls thoda pani peele..

She nodded and drank the water

kav=muje dawai leni hai

k.d=le liya ...dekho

kav=aare ha ye kaise...

k.m=mera beta bhi aaise hi nakre karta tha.....(emo)

k.d= ahem..chalo sab bache ..khelo abhi....

After 2 hours..

kav=teri mom se kabhi aur mil lenge..abhi chale mere ghar?

tas=ha..

k.m=tu ghar kaise aayegi?

kav=mai papa se bolkar isse ghar drop karwa dungi dadi

k.m=ok bacha

They left from there 

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