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last part mai sirf 6 comments the 😢 agar aap logo ko koi part acha na lage toh bhi aap bol sakte ho.....i will try to improve..but pls comment taki muje bhi lage ki meri story log padhna chahte hai......

and thanku to all jo jo roz comments karte hai.....!!!!

tas=matlab Karan uncle ne meri mom ko rulaya

kav=nhi..teju aunty ne mere papa ko udas kiya

tas=nhi kavya....

kav=ha ....

kar=bacho sun toh

tas=nhi sunni hai hume koi bhi baat/....

kav=itni badi baat aap dono ne humse chupayi

tas= mom ..aapne bola tha na ki hum dono bffs hai.....toh bffs se toh har baat share karte hai na

teju= beta vo..

kav=papa...aapne bola tha na ki hume ek dusre ko har choti badi baat batani chahiye.....toh aapne kyu chupayi mujse ye baat??

kar=princess vo..

tas=mom...ye aapna theek nhi kiya

She ran out teju followed her

kav= papa....muje aapse ye ummed nhi thi..

She ran in her room and locked the door

Outside

Taswi was sitting on the bench and was not ready to listen to teju

teju=beta....

tas=nhi sunna muje

teju=ek baar sun meri baat.....pls tasu...

taswi=bolo (in crying tone)

teju=beta..mai aur karan alag hue the kyuki hume misunderstanding hui thi......aur humne ye baat tum dono se chupayi taki tum dono udas na ho...pehele se hi tuje papa ki kami kahi na kahi toh mehsus hoti thi ...abhi ye tuje batati toh tu bhi karan se nafrat karti aur vo tere samne jab bhi aata tu chahti ki vo tuje pyaar kare aur tu usse...par vo possible nhi hota beta......isiliye jaise hi hume sach pata chala na humne pehele tum dono ko batana chaha....kal raat ko hi par tum dono soo gaye the....beta...pls Taswi..tu janti hai mai tere bina nhi reh sakti ....pls beta (crying )

tas=mom..

She hugged her

tas=its ok....mom....mai abhi naraz nhi hu aapse

Teju-sach

tas=ha....

teju=taswi..tu karan ko apna payegi?

Taswi saw her

tas=mom pls nhi.....mai hum dono ki life mai kisi ko nhi aane dena chahti hu....agar future mai vapis aaisa kuch hua tho?? Agar vo   aur Kavya  aapko lekar mujse dur gaye toh??

She hugged her

At karan;s side

kar=princess..pls darwaza khol..pls beta

kav=nhi nhi nhi....aapne mujse itni badi baat chupayi..(crying)

kar=roo mat kavu...teri tabiyat kharab hojayegi..pls

kav=nhiiii

Karan took a deep breathe

kar=princes.s..tu janti hai na ki tu papa ki lifeline hai...tere bina tere papa jee hi nhi payenge...tuje thodi si bhi kharoch tak aati hai na toh mera jee upar neeche ho jata hai ......toh soch agar mai tuje ye bata deta ki Teju hi teri mom hai aur uss wakt muje jo galat fehmi hui thi vo tuje bhi ho jati na beta..aur tu bhi usse hate karti...vo tere samne hokar bhi tu usse pyaar se nhi nafrat se dekhti..ye baat tere dil ko chubti beta...isiliye maine ye baat tujse chupayi....aur aur jaise hi muje pata chala na ki Teju ki koi galti nhi hai aur ye sab ek misunderstanding hai toh sabse pehele mai tuje hi batane aane wala tha par tum soo gayi thi na princess..isiliye nhi bata paya...pls princess aaja bahar

Kavya opened the door

Her face was full red due to crying

kar=princess

She hugged him

kav=its ok papa

kar=my baby

After a minute

kar=Kavu..tu Teju ko apnayegi?

kav= papa ....aap dono ke beeche misunderstanding hui thi...vo hume vapis chodh ke gaye tho?? Isiliye muje nhi chahiye vo...agar vo aur Taswi  apko leke  kahi dur chale gaye toh muje chodh ke??  

Tejran could not give answers to them 

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