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Avni woke up hearing her phone ringing

Avni(answering her phone)(sleepy+yawning):Hello....

Caller:Sorry to disturb,pls neeche aa jao

A:Neillll.......(looking the time)Its 12am Neil,are you out of your mind?

Neil:I know...please(serious tone)

A: Noticing the seriousness in his voice):Okay....2minutes...abhi aayi

(Avni climbed down her bed  and just untied her hair and tied it up again into a messy bun. She was wearing a comfy palazzo and a tee. Avni came down and went to Neil who was sitting on his bike)

A:Kya hua Neil?Kal in fact aaj(looking at the time) humari engagement hai aur tum mujhe aise aandhi raat ko neeche bula rhi ho...

N: Baitho Avni

A:Neill...(she was cut off by Neil)

N:I need to talk

A:ok(and sat on the bike)

( The ride was completely silent. Neil stopped the bike at a cliff.)

[A/N-Imagine the cliff where AvNeil met in NK]

N:Chlo Avni

A(doubtful):Neil

N:We need to talk Avni...wrna it will affect my life, our life,our relation(in pleading tone)

A:Neil you are scaring me

     (Neil took her hand on his and made her face him)

N:I know yeh humara shadi arranged hai aur hum ek doosre ko itne bhi achche se nhi jaante (he paused and looks at Avni who is listening carefully.)Lekin I don't know Avni.I have fallen for you (teary eyed)....Idk tmhre dil mein mere liye feelings hai ya nhi.....I love you Avni.I really do(sobs lightly)

A(looking into his eyes):I...

N:Kuch mt bolo Avni...Let me complete. We talked about everything....siwaayi humare past ke...air tumne mujhe mana bhi kiya..Par Avni aaj mujhe mere past ke baare mein tumse baat krna chahta hoon

A:Lekin iski koi zroorat nhi hai Neil(cupping his face)

N: Zaroorat hai...(sighs)Kyunki agr past present mein aaye toh present mein past k baare mein discuss krna zroori hota hai

A:hmmm

N:Toh suno...Jb mein college mein tha I had a crush on my classmate.Crush toh sirf formality tha lekin I was madly in love with her.One day she proposed me,and naturally I accepted it.I was the happiest soul. I was so madly in love with her ki I started planning future with her at such a young age(chuckles)We were in relation from first year and it lasted till final year.But in the final year Avni...a very big misunderstanding hua.I thought she broke my trust but I gave her a chance to explain...wo jo bol deti mein wo maan leta...lekin she din't even utter a word...We broke up...Phir exams suru ho gya.Mein PG aur higher studies k liye abroad gya aur wo khi aur....oh...i forgot to tell you her name....Lehar...her name was Lehar

A:Lehar(smiles)...aage bolo Neil

N(surprised): Tmhe kaise pta aage hai?

A:Tumne bola na misunderstanding...mtlb it got cleared baadme...so aage hai. Bolo(blinks)

N:I was a broken aashiq for 2years. Then I moved on. I never hated her but my feelings for her died away. Aur aaj....7 saal baad i met her at a shop. We talked jo talk humein...use 7 saal pehle krni thi we had it now...she cleared all the misunderstandings...she said ki she still loves me and want to be in my life...Idk Avni mein kya kroon? Itna mujhe zroor pta hai ki I love you and only you...

A(cupping his face): I love you too Neil(crying)

N(hugging her):Ye confession kitna romantic ho skta tha na.. Lekin meri wajah se...

A:Shhh...kuch mt bolo...tmhe jawaab chahiye na

N:hmm

A(smiles):Mein yhaan pe ek third person bnke opinion dena chahungi Neil...Tum tmhri dil ki suno...Koi bhi faisla out of regret mt lo...Agr meri frnd ye situation mein hoti na then I will say him to choose his present. Pta hai kyu?

N:kyu?

A:Kyunki as u said tmhre dil mein ab Lehar k liye koi bhi feelings nhi hai agr kuch hai toh wo sirf regret hai...uspe trust na krne ka...unse baat na krne ka....use akele chodne na regret....Agr tum Lehar k saath apna life spend krne ka decision loge na kuch waqt baad ye regret frustration aur majboori mein badal jaayega....Isiliye I will say to choose any out of love not out of regret....

N:Avni...

A:Poora sunlo...Agr mujhe chun rhi ho toh bhi out of love hi chunna out of regret nhi....apni family ke khushi k liye ya meri khushi k liye nhi....kyunki  aisi khushi sirf thodi der k liye hi rhegi....So jisko bhi choose kr rhi ho out of love choose krlo...not out of regret...

N:Y are u so good Avni?Meine socha tha ki you will leave me, will break the engagement... lekin you understood me, you helped me to sort it out and you handled it maturely...you are the best thing happened to me....

A:(smiles)

N(smiles):Neil Khanna has chosen Avni Mehta as his life partner...purely out of love (looking at her)...Would you like to grow older with me Miss Mehta?

A:Nhi

N:Av..

A:Avni Mehta would LOVE to grow older with you Mr.Khanna...I don't LIKE to,I would LOVE to..

  ( AvNeil pull eachother into a bone crushing hug ...They stayed there like that for 10minutes...)

N(breaking the hug):Aur Lehar?

A:We will talk to her..

N:Hmmm..toh chle wifey

A(frowning): Wifey? Not yet Mr.Khanna

N:Oops..to-be-wifey

A:Hmm...better
(Both burst into fits of laughter)

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Phewww.....just finished it...960 words😪....koi nhi....

Was it too long for an OS...

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Lehar🌊