It was honestly a really tough choice to select the best three because I loved all the entries with all my heart. <3

Criteria:
Vocabulary
Grammar
Story
Character resemblance to original

So here goes-

1st- tanlines88
I was just amazed by your vocab!

2nd- Fallingstars99
You melted my heart with the emotions ;)

3rd- I really couldn't choose between Resserell and AnimeStoleMyLife cause both of you were equally good :)
@Resserell you mentioned red ribbon tied around their pinkies so I just HAD to give it to you ;)

And to all the others who participated, thanks! I loved reading each and every one of them! :)

Adios amigos,

Harshini