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FIRST IMPRESSIONS!

title! (3/5)

-there's only two options, it's either i'm dumb or we're not too deep into the story yet aaashjsak i don't really get why 'high fidelity' is the title of your book but it sounds sorta fitting!

cover! (5/5)

-ooooh it looks very pretty!

description! (10/10)

-this is honestly such an interesting description? it'll for sure spark curiosity in the readers' minds which will make them click your book. what you've written also has what i think are the 'necessities' of a good description, an engrossing yet brief piece about/from the book and a dialogue.

WRITING STYLE!

grammar! (18/20)

-okay um, i just wanted to say that your writing style is absolutely fascinating and amazing?? how you describe things is honestly very addicting and satisfying!

-there's really nothing bad to say about your writing style! it was quite difficult to find any flaws because i think you proofread your book nicely.

-here's what i found: (i may be wrong in some of my corrections aaaah if i am, please lmk!)

-i think you meant 'has' instead of 'as'.

-your sentence is perfectly fine and grammatically correct but i just thought that maybe substituting one 'back' with its appropriate synonym may sound better.

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-i believe that the order of adjectives is wrong? here's a reference:

-your adjectives are 'large', 'glass' and 'five-tier'.

-i think that 'five-tier' belongs to the shape category? i mean, it's not necessarily an opinion too, it's probably in between the size and shape sections. 'large' belongs to size while 'glass' belongs to material.

-i guess the final order is 'large five-tier glass chandeliers'? aaaaah i'm afraid i might be wrong oops

-also, you only add a comma between coordinate adjectives.
ex. it is going to be a long, hot summer.
tip: add an 'and' between the two adjectives and if it fits, then they're coordinate adjectives and you can replace the 'and' with a comma.

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-i'm not sure if 'please do' is what you meant but yeah, i just thought that 'pray' sounded kinda odd.

summary of everything:

-welp um you actually don't really have a lot of problems with grammar! my only sincere and recommended advice is to proofread your book more to avoid any errors.

-i'm honestly impressed?? you did an amazing job in this section! your writing style is so captivating and i just love it a lot omg

diction! (10/10)

-magnificent boii your choice of words makes reading really enjoyable!

editing! (3/5)

-this is most probably because of some of the missing/wrong words in some of your paragraphs.

STORY DYNAMICS!

plot! (19/20)

-this is such an incredible score for a book with currently 6 chapters! it's honestly just something new, y'know? everything just sounds realistic and i'm honestly just shocked in general, your book's quality is so high up there and it's already this good with just a few chapters?? how amazing will it be when it has over 20 chapters i-

-your book isn't the typical, cliche stories that's usually around wattpad, it's something different and ohmygod i'm loving it so far!

flow! (10/10)

-i don't even know what to say lmao it's slow and steady.

characters! (10/10)

-your book probably has one of the best and most lifelike characters that i've encountered so far! taehyung and yura's relationship is such goals tbh yes, of course, they do argue and that's a realistic detail but they also have the sweetest and cutest moments ever i-

-like i couldn't hold back and commented on your book when i usually don't because i wanted to say everything that i wanted to say on the review chapter itseld but i just couldn't resist it with your book-

-i just love your characters overall! hoseok and jungkook too, of course, they're diverse as well.

OVERALL EXPERIENCE!

satisfaction! (10/10)

-waaah this is just a high score for a book with only 6 chapters omg i feel like it's mostly because of your plot and characters uwu

addictiveness! (5/5)

-maybe it's because i was waiting for adorable taehyungxyura moments but cOuGh, it's all because your book is really addictive! your writing style together with the other assets of your book is probably the reason why hehe

overall thoughts! (103/110)

-your final score is so impressive aaaaah even i can't believe that i can give a score this high omg

-i just discovered such an underrated gem and you have no idea how happy i am that you requested aaahsjaka

-you did a marvelous job writing 'high fidelity' and i hope you keep up the amazing work! your book has so much potential and it deserves much more reads and votes than the amount that it currently has!

-only tip is to proofread your whole story like i said before and you're good to go!

-pls invite me to tae and yura's wedding thank u :))

-thank you so much for requesting! have a terrific day ahead, kay!

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