'You must remember this' Book by FranklinBarnes

Cover: It goes well with what the story that is being portrayed. 5 points.

Title: I like it. It's catchy and has a good ring to it. 10 points.

Summary/Blurb: Nice work but it wouldn't hurt to be more descriptive. 9 points.

Plot: At first I thought this story was based on Frank but as I got more into it, you had some strong foundations. What I see is you trying to show people how others think and why they are the way they are (right?). Further more it was good and extremly descriptive, I didn't even know some of the words used there and it was educational. 30 points.

Character development: I'm going to be honest and say I could not read it all. Not because of time but because I couldn't graps what more you were showing. I couldn't tell who was the main character or the side and some acted similar in my view. 20 points.

Style of writing: Third person is a hard style to excute when writing a novel and only few can do it properly. You are among that few amount of people. 10 points

Grammar: I didn't find any problem apart from the words that I am not familiar with their meaning. 10 points.

Total: 94 points.

Now here's my advice.

"Not every one or thing is perfect and if it is, it's a fake." -THEO

I would recommend using smaller words to make it easier for people who have low diction to read and just have fun with it.

As long as you enjoy what you do then you are on the right track.

Have a nice day♤