'ARAGONS' Book by earlfangs

Cover: It is really eye catching and very unique. 5 points.

Title: Short and sweet, a very sure way to rack up some readers. 10 points.

Summary/Blurb: I love it but I don't think mentioning the genre is compulsory. Being that it is among the tags that you added to your story. 9 points.

Plot: Honestly its books like these and the few others that I have read when I started this review book, that make me want to dive into the fantasy genre and never come out. It looks very original and I can literraly see the sweat and hard work poured into it. You my dear friend have the pizzaz I'm always going on and on about. 30 points.

Character development: I can see how you do it and you are doing it well. Also I like how you flesh out your characters, I mean you don't make it obvious who is better in comparison and their flaws and features are very relatable. (Apart from Raia's purple hair, even I haven't seen someone with that yet😅.)  25 points.

Style of writing: Third person and semi-formal. Bold choice especially since its hard to perfect. From where I'm standing, you seem to know how to flow with it but sometimes it looks kind of rushed. Then again good things take time, so if you want to perfect this skill be my guest. 7 points.

Grammar: I spotted a few missing punctuations and misuse of certain tenses. 5 points.

Total: 91 points

Here's my advice♤

I know I'm not supposed to sing your praises but good job on your book and congrats on your awards.

Anyway you seem to already have every thought out, might I suggest you get yourself an editor or sit your sweet behind down and edit your work.

Believe it or not but bad grammar puts off a lot of readers and if you want to get and keep readers, I suggest you get that part ironed out.

Kudos to the trailer you made and remember to never loose sight in doing what you love; especially if it makes you happy.

Have a nice day♤