'The Bane Of Chaos: Amulet Of Ausar' Book by yaris052018and Queen_of_life_Heba from the cue on the review at QuerenciaCommunity

Cover: It is very eye catching and it gives hints on the genre of the story. 5 points.

Title: I will continue to stress the point of the longer the title the easier it will be for the reader to forget it. Now don't get me wrong, the title does correspond with the story. I suggest you should please shorten it to something more catchy. 8 points.

Summary/Blurb: It is very intresting and it gives readers an insight to the book. 10 points.

Plot: I'm just going to point out; that I have only read the the first two chapters which are the only chapters on the book and the prologue. I can tell that you obviously know where you are going with this story. But I suggest you give readers a bit of a warning and a guide before they get into the story. I recently took a liking to mythology, assuming I was not familiar with some mythological gods, I would have been very lost. So far its a good book but since it hasn't gone far, my opinion can't be fully expressed. 20 points.

Character development: Like I said earlier, there are only two chapters and a prologue. I gather that the female lead (Phiya was it?), went through a good development in chapter one and following up to chapter two. I also love how you introduce your characters and how none of them are better in comparison to the other. But the characters have a long way to, if they are to fufill their roles in the story. 15 points.

Style of writting: Third person and formal, I'm not very familiar with this writting style since I hardly see a book  that is written like this. I also took into account how much effort you put into this and I think you are on the right track. (Ask someone who is familiar in this style to help you develop it.)  10 points.

Grammar: Hats off to you for the way you structured everything. 10 points.

Total: 78 points.

Now here's my advice♤

I would normally do reviews for books that have up to ten chapters but you registered from the Querencia community.

Anyway I highly suggest tglhat you write out some guidelines, especially about the deities and the roles they play. It got really confusing and I had to Google some things up.

Most readers prefer to not be stressed by Authors, by having to look something up to understand what the Author is trying to portray.

Also please break it down,  I get that your style of writting is supposed to make you comfortable. Another thing you should take into account is its readability. Since its your work you might not be able to tell, but for some readers that have pet peeves, when they are confused they give up and move on.

Again hats off to the originality of your story and I hope you continue to do what you do, esspecially if it makes you happy.

Have a nice day♤