Review|twenty-five

'Throne Of Dragonix' Book by Baqkns
Cover: I prefer the one that was there before but both still give a perfect illustration to the book. 5 points.

Title: It is very accurate to the story and I don't think any other title would cut it. 10 points.

Summary/Blurb: It explains the book properly and gives the readers an insight to the story. 10 points.

Plot: Honestly your plot is very original. I hardly read fantasy books and so far I think that genre is underrated. (Who would have thought that I would like fantasy?). I also love the fact you gave the readers a guideline of some sort at the beginning. It will save the readers the hassle and make them want to read more of your story. You obviously know where you want this story to go and you are executing it perfectly. 30 points.

Character development: So far I can't really pin point much development, since I can't even make out who the main character is. I'm thinking either Ignia, Liam or Bloom, (please help me out here.) But you display their personalities through their actions which is good but please try and allow them grow a bit.Also you named Ignia's father after a rock?😅😂. 19 points.

Style of writting: Third person and formal, so far you should be on the right path. We learn everyday so feel free to ask a professional about this writting style, since I'm an Amature in this department. 9 points.

Grammar: No errors from where I'm standing. 10 points.

Total: 93 points.

Now here's my advice♤

Honestly your story has the potential to make it but don't beat yourself too much about getting readers.

I know from expirence that it can get aggravating when you see books, that might not near your standards but get readers while yours don't.

Just keep doing what you love and remember that good things take time to happen.

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