'The Overated Version Of Relatability' Book by Frozedchicken

Cover: I think that it is very nice and unique but it doesn't match the theme of your story. 3 points.

Title: Like I always say, the longer the title the easier it is to forget it. Dearie please shorten it and I promise that you will get more readers. 6 points.

Summary/Blurb: It's way too long and doesn't match the theme of your story. Please give it another go, maybe add a dialogue and I'm sure that you will get more readers. 5 points.

Plot: Honestly, your book is a character driven story. Don't get me wrong, I liked the originality and you set a goal and you were executing it the way you planned to. The thing about your plot is that the readers won't really get a visual of things. I guess I could say that the theme of your book is dark or gothic? (Please correct me if I'm wrong.) There has to be so much more than the main character's view on the world. I get that she has a rough time but I'm wondering where did it all start from? Where did it all go wrong?  (In terms of the book, 🤔) 19 points.

Character development: Well I didn't see much of this and the main character sounds cynical. Even if you don't literraly show us the comparison, its not hard to spot and I feel that the main character is better than the side characters. 14 points.

Style of writing: This is the first time that I am seeing a book, which is written in first person and is still formal. I'm not really familiar with this writing style, so I can't guaranteed that you nailed it. But so far I see that you are doing great. 8 points.

Grammar: There was misuse of punctuations, try and please go back and fix it. 5 points.

Total: 60 points.

Now here's my advice♤

A book is either character driven or plot driven. A good book is a combination of both and is well balanced.

As I said earlier, your book is character driven. In the sense that you write more about the character's thoughts or feelings.

Take for instance the weed party at Guru's house, Sure Raavi was there and you described it. Most of that chapter was focused solely on her feelings about the situation and not the situation itself. You need to shed light on the plot or situations, i.e why does Guru hold such parties? What convinced Raavi to even go to one?

Do you understand?💁‍♀️

I'm a sucker for details and I like to know everything to the T, you should really describe the setting more but try not to info dump.

Then please give more life to your characters. I'm guessing that the theme is dark but that doesn't mean that all the characters have to be twisted.

Then I love how you show and tell your work, the chapters have dept but how you move from settings could use some work.

Finally keep up with your doing and remember to be happy while doing it.

'It takes one word to make or break any and every thing.' -THEO

Have a nice day. ♤