'Thick as theives' Book by AlexaLee761

Cover: The cover is nice and unique, it really shows the girl and the time frame of the book without giving much away. 5 points.

Title: I was thinking that it was a book about a gang of theieves but it was far from it. The title doesn't give much away apart from the fact that its about theives. 10 points.

Summary/Blurb: It doesn't give much away but its a good summary. Then you could add a part from the book; let's say a dialogue. It could draw in more readers. 9 points.

Plot: At first I was very confused on what exactly was going on. The begginning line could use more effort.  Its a known fact, that first liners make or break your book. Try another way and I advice you show more not tell. Then your description is on point, I like how you classify the success of the characters by their surrounding. 28 points.

Character development: So far its a smooth development. Darcy is becoming braver and her love for her sister Sen is getting stronger. I also like how none of the remaining characters are there to make it look that Darcy is better in comparison. 25 points.

Style of writting: I would advice you minimize the use of the prononun 'I' and take on others like 'me' or 'myself'. The writting is good and its a work in progress, keep going and you'll get the hang of it. 8 points.

Grammar: I only saw one mistake, apart from that its okay. 9 points.

Total: 94 points.

We are all learning everyday, my grammar isn't spot on but it's not bad either. Someone corrected my book today, the typos that I missed and although it was an ego breaker, it was nice to know and remember that I am still human. And so are you.

Have a nice day♤