'[1] Rising Atrocities' Book by PiyaliMajumdar

Cover: The cover looks nice but it doesn't give me an insight to the story. It's a cool picture of a girl, most Authors tend to use one of their main characters as the cover. Yours is a boy, (do you get where I am going with this?). Although I love the side note at the bottom, take it back to the drawing board. I promise that if you work on it, you could get more readers. 3 points.

Title: If your cover fails you, your title shouldn't. Your title is unique and it fits the storyline perfectly. 10 points.

Summary/Blurb: Short and sweet but could use a little more work. 7 points.

Plot: I can tell that you know what you are doing and you know where you are going with the story. The only issue that I have noticed is that the character's feelings aren't taken into consideration. I know that they are fictional and don't really exist, but it would be nice to see how you explain their emotions. Apart from that, the plot seems good. 24 points.

Character development: So far I can see the improvement in Chase and Amber which is good. Don't forget that as the main characters develop, the side character should also develop along with them. 25 points.

Style of writing: So far your style of first person is good but some details should be included. 8 points.

Grammar: Just the usual punctuations or misspellings. Get yourself an editor or sit your sweet butt on that chair and edit your work. 5 points.

Total: 82 points.

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