Name:Flareclaw You don't see Flare alot in a name, it's quite refreshing! Although claw is certainly more common.

Clan: ShoreClan Alright, sounds peaceful enough.

Gender:she-cat 👍

Appearance:ginger tabby with a white muzzle,chest,belly and paws. She has a "M" shape on her forehead and one of her ears is ripped with a scar running down to her eyelid, forcing her eye to be closed at all times. Her eyes are blue. Don't you mean 'eye'? Heh...Yeah, okay, not funny, but other than my stupidly thought-out joke that I decided to include, I think the details on this are good, I like that you included the 'M' shape that tabbies always have on their heads.

Personality:Close-minded and snappy. Gets offended easily. Shes more aggressive then assertive,and constantly has missunderstandings with her brother.Shes more empathetic then the average clan cat;but tries to hide it as to not seem "unloyal" :> I like this, as there's not many times you see a character that is more 'mean', but also empathetic. Maybe it's just a bias I have with characters, though. :)

Dislikes:bad weather,dawn patrols,frogs,elders,snappy cats(quite ironic!),night time,her friends mate,her parents and foxes I also would dislike dawn patrols! Who gets up that early, eugh. And I like the fact that she dislikes snappy cats, despite her being one herself.

Likes:swimming,her half-siblings,her friends,fighting,feeling the wind on her whiskers,day time and gatherings. I like you elaborated on her siblings being her half-siblings, it gives it more depth.

Hunting:3/10 Climbing:5/10 Swimming:8/10 Loyalty:8/10 Respectfullness:4/10 Reputation:4/10 I think it's well rounded out! I like her being loyal, despite not having a very good reputation.

Backstory:im making a fanfic on her,so id rather not spoil it for potential readers,apologies! :< That's completely fine! I won't let it affect my rating, :)

She feels well fleshed out! I like her concept, or maybe I just like grumpy people being the main character of a story. ;) otherwise though, I think she has great potential! There are flaws here and there, but also good qualites. I can't see anything other than a 10/10! Because if I gave you a 9/10, I think it'd just be lowering the quality of this character, I might even have to read the fanfic you're making :) 👍

What I think she'd look like: (It won't work so I can't do it, lol)