Name: Falcongaze I know this is normal, but I like that his prefix is 'Falcon'.

Clan: ShadowClan alright, normal.

Gender: Male nice.

Sexuality: Straight alrighty.

Appearance: Brown tabby tom with soft green eyes and a twisted back leg its a good description, but maybe put some more detail? Like ruffled fur or smooth fur, lean or muscled. Things like that, no offense though.

Personality: Loyal, low self-esteem, clingy, introvert alright.

Dislikes: His leg, his mother (for abandoning him) seems like some reasonable things to dislike.

Likes: Snowhawk who is SnowHawk? Kinda caught me off guard there.

Hunting: 6/10
Climbing: 3/10
Swimming: 4/10
Loyalty: 9/10
Respectfulness: 8/10
Pretty balanced.

Reptutation: Not great, many cats think he's useless because of his twisted leg that makes sense.

Backstory: Falcongaze was born with a twisted leg, and wasn't going to be able to become an apprentice until his friend, Snowhawk, taught him to be able to hunt and fight despite it. He ended up becoming and apprentice and eventually, a warrior. He ends up becoming mates with Snowhawk then being killed by her.
hmmm, there are some holes in this backstory. Was SnowHawk a warrior when teaching him? If so that'd be a bit odd if SnowHawk wasnt his mentor, also what was SnowHawk's motive to kill FalconGaze?

Despite all the flaws, FalconGaze is a decent OC, with a bit of patching in his backstory, and maybe more detail, he'd be better! :D your rating is... 6/10! Have a good day, and I'm sorry if I offended you. You dont have to follow any advice I have to give! Do what you like with him, because remember, its just my opinon!

What I think he'd look like: