CrowEar

Name: Crow'Ear (Crow- because of her black fur and -ear for her chipped ear.) A simple name, although it makes sense. I can't say I haven't been one to make up simple names like this either.

Clan: CoastClan (A FanClan in which clan cats, instead of disliking and avoiding twolegs, live in harmony with them near the coastline of a beach. But due to being constantly given food, the clan had become weak both in hunting and fighting.) I like this concept! It's different and I could see it working out. :)

Gender: She-Cat 👍

Sexuality: Bi  Alrighty

Appearance: Crow'Ear is a "shorter than average'' she-cat with long, but messy, pure black fur. Crow'Ear has yellow eyes, the similar shade of the glowing sun. Her ears are chipped after a failed hunt of a very angry squirrel. Her tail are longer than usual with a longer fur than the rest of her body. I like it, its descriptive despite not having a very colourful cat to describe. I imagine she'd be pretty embarrassed to tell anyone how her ears got chipped, lol.

Personality: Brave but never think twice. She is easily distracted and acts tougher than she actually is. But still, Crow'Ear loves helping the clan. The kits of the clan likes her bravery! Some of them tend to pretend to be like her in the nursery.Sounds like a very difficult cat to deal with! I imagine any cat would loathe having to work with her on hunts and such, lol. I like the fact kits like her enough to pretend to be like her, she must have a big influence on the tiny little kits!

Dislikes: Crabs, the Warrior Code in which Medicine Cats are not allowed to have mates, the Sea Cave in which CoastClan cats train and loneliness. The dislikes are pretty relatable (I struggled so much typing that). I am curious as to why they train alone? I think that'd be an interesting concept to expand on.

Likes: Twolegs, Food Seasoned with Seawater, Puddleberry, her family, and Digging in the SandHonestly, food seasoned with seawater? Me too bro 😎. I like the uniqueness of her likes.

Hunting: 3/10Climbing: 6/10Swimming: 8/10Loyalty: 7/10Respectfulness: 6/10 Seems well rounded out! I get why they'd be good at swimming. I could see Coastclan and Riverclan getting along quite well.

Reputation: Not the best due to her spontaneousness. Makes sense.

Backstory: Kithood: It was a bright greenleaf, which is also the day a litter of kits was born. Four of them actually. One of them was a black cat which they called Crowkit. One day, her sibling, Snowkit gave an idea of snooping out of the nursery to the rest of his siblings. Crowkit, without thinking, agreed. They sneaked out of the nursery and out to the wilderness. And of course, Crowkit got distracted by a butterfly. She tried to catch it, but while she is running after the butterfly she got lost in the near forest. Thankfully, a Coastclan Patrol saw her and escorted her back to the clan. Sounds spontaneous, and kit-like, to go wandering off. 👍

Apprentice hood: When Crowkit and her littermate got to 6 moon, she was very excited. Crowpaw was mentored by Adderpelt, Snowpaw was with Ashwing, Smallpaw was with Brokenclaw, and Ravenpaw was with Spottedfur. Adderpelt started teaching Crowpaw with hunting. ''If you can't learn to hunt, there's no chance that you'll survive here.'' Mewed Adderpelt. ''Really? Hunt? Hah! We can just beg the twolegs for food! As easy as that! They'll give us some!'' Said a tall, sleek furred, ginger tabby. ''Yes Shiningpool.. but we don't need anyone to sneak on cats here too.'' Crowpaw didn't care about whatever they are arguing about. Her eyes was more onto a tom. A medium white with black spotted fur tom to be exact. The tom noticed that Crowpaw was looking at her so, he decided to share tounges with her. ''I'm Puddlepaw! May I ask your name?'' Crowpaw twitched her ear. ''Me? I'm Crowpaw!'' Puddlepaw looked at her in awe. ''You're that kit who explored out of the clan correct?'' Crowpaw just nodded. "Wow! That means you have seen things outside the territories! You might get eaten by other clans!" Meanwhile, Shiningpool and Adderpelt stopped their arguing. ''Alright Crowpaw let's continue hunting.'' Shiningpool looked at Puddlepaw. ''You too, Puddlepaw. We have to learn about the location of multiple herbs so you can be an amazing future medicine cat.'' Puddlepaw and Crowpaw said goodbye to each other and went their own way. One fine morning, Crowpaw tried to hunt by herself but of course, Adderpelt is still monitoring Crowpaw. Crowpaw is hunting a crab but missed it. The crab, now angry, attacked Crowpaw in term of self-defence and pinched Crowpaw's ear with it's pincer. Adderpelt, whom saw it all, hurried to her and brought her back to the camp and to Shiningpool. ''Back from hunting eh? Oh.'' Shiningpool looked at Crowpaw's ear. ''Yeah, I think that chipped ear is permanent sadly. Puddlepaw, can you give me the Comfrey?'' Puddlepaw quickly grabbed a herb. ''This should soothe the wound. But from now on, you're stuck with that chipped ear.'' Puddlepaw quickly ran to Crowpaw. ''Are you alright? Is it better now?'' Crowpaw gave a little smile and then nodded. ''I'll search for Daisyheart and Blackflight. Oh, Ravenpaw! Are you here for more Comfrey?'' Meowed Shiningpool. ''Correct! And, oh. Hello my not-so-annoying littermate! A hurt ear I see.'' Crowpaw sighed, then nodded. ''Oh! Daisyheart! Blackflight! Mom, dad! Why are you here?'' Daisyheart and Blackflight looked at each other. ''We're just checking on Crowpaw. Let's go Crowpaw, Ravenpaw, you both deserve to earn a good rest.'' A few moons later, it was the time for Crowpaw and her littermates to officially become a warrior. Smallpaw became Smallclaw because he was very good at fighting. Snowpaw became Snowrunner because she's a swift cat. Ravenpaw became Ravenfang because she's the best when biting. And Crowpaw? Crowpaw became Crowear, because she has a chipped ear. It seems like they have normal training, so I wouldn't get why the clan would be bad at hunting. Unless, Adderpelt wanted to actually train her apprentice that way. The story with this clan makes me quite curious!

Warrior hood: Crow'Ear became a good warrior but is still longing to meet his one true love; Puddlepaw, now called Puddleberry. She knows that Puddleberry's a medicine cat and she knows well that she can't marry him. After all that though, Crow'Ear is still determined to chase that dream of her no matter how quote-unquote "Impossible" it is. I had a feeling CrowEar would like PuddleBerry! I always liked forbidden romances, they always spice up the stories! That might be a bit biased from me, but it won't effect my rating on the quality, you can't get to me that easy, heh.

I quite like this OC! I will admit, I'm a bit more curious on the clan itself and how it works, but considering her character, she's not bad. I'll give her a solid 7.5/10. For my wishing for more elaboration on how the clan works, as Adderpelt seemed to want to train CrowEar properly, when the clan itself isn't good at hunting and fighting, I'd imagine they didn't train often. Is that a only AdderPelt thing or is it just the laziness of the other cats that cause them to not train as often? I think that's enough questions, though. I just quite like the concept of this clan, lol.

What I think she looks like: (It won't work, so I can't do it, lol.)

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