Wretchedblaze


Wretchedblaze 

-blaze is acutally underused for Warriors oc. I really like how  they changed his name. 

Who knows by now...

That's cool!

Tom

Nice. Toms are amazing.

Dark gray tabby tom with lighter gray underbelly and piercing amber eyes.

He's a villin with amber eyes. That's a little bit of a cliche! I really like the light gray under-belly. 

Regretful, snappy, doesn't think before he speaks, pretends to be mean.

Anything good? Maybe he's kind and loves kits? Add a few unflaws (good flaws)

SunClan, now the Dark Forest.

SunClan is pretty overused. But most OCs are in StarClan. POINTS FOR YOU!

*deep breath* As a kit, he was Shadekit and he had a sister, Owlkit. Owlkit dared him to fight her claws unsheathed. He did, did and Owlkit was severely wounded and Shadekit was renamed Wretchedkit. They became warriors, Wretchedblaze and Owlflower. Wretchedblaze and Owlflower were patrolling, and an enemy clan wad crossing borders. They kïlled Owlflower, and Wretchedblaze was blamed by his Clan, getting chased out. He was then kïlled by the same Clan. He went to StarClan, but was chased out by his mother to the Dark Forest. A cat called Fearstar made Wretchedblaze train Redstar to be evil. Owlflower visited Wretchedblaze in the Dark Forest, and they helped save the Clans from Redstar but at the cost of Wretchedblaze ' s second life.

THIS IS AMAZING! HE'S SO WELL THOUGHT OUT! I LOVE THIS OC!

Mate: no

Crush: yes, a cat called Silverwhisper 

Kits: none

That's good. Not all cats have to have kits! ;)

I give him a 9.5/10. He's so cool! Lovin' him! The next OC will be...Peaceheart. Yep, Peaceheart. 


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