Whisper


Name: Whisper That Chills The Bone (Whisper)

YES MY FIRST TRIBE CAT I LOVE THESE PEEP THEY ARE SO FLIPPING AMAZING GUYS COMMENT YOUR TRIBE OCs THEY ARE SO COOL AND THEIR NAMES ARE AMAZING! 

 Gender: She-Cat

Ahh. Cliche, we meet again. BUT REALLY I DON'T CARE! OOOOOOH I REALLY DON'T CARE! *blares Demi Lavato again*

 Appearance: A very light grey she-cat with a dark grey belly and black tips of the ears. Her eyes are a mixture of shades of brown . 

Light gray is pretty overused but I'll ignore it for the other parts that are super origanal. Her eyes sound so pretty! 

Clan: Tribe of Looming Trees 

Mysterious. 

 Rank: Prey-Hunter 

I know tribes are not very often in fanfics, but when they are, most she-cats are prey-hunters. Not that that is big, but it's kinda true. 

 Personality: Doesn't chat much to most cats, but talks a bit to some close friends. She tends to creep some cats out with her intimidating stare, her silence and strange words. Whisper's feelings can get hurt very easily, and she is also a little cold-hearted. However, if she does be rude or mean she probably doesn't mean it. 

She sounds amazing! :)

 Backstory: Whisper grew up as a loner. As a kit, she used to live in a small patch of territory in a thick woodland. When she was only 6 moons, there was a huge forest fire. Whisper and her sister Poppy were trapped in a tree as the fire raged around them. Whisper tried her hardest to support her younger sister, but her words only made the situation worse.. The branch her sister was on wasn't strong enough to support her, so her sister fell into the fire. Whisper was horrified, she thought it was all her fault that her words had made Poppy shift and move so the branch had fell. Whisper then spotted her parents, Birdy and Jack. She helplessly tried to reassure herself and them, but before long she was watching her parents be burnt to death. Whisper miraculously managed to escape the forest fire. After travelling for a full day with next to no food, she stumbled into The Tribe Of Looming Trees camp. There she was cared for, but she didn't speak for two sunrises. When she did, her words were eerie, giving her her name. 

Never seen this before. A MILLION POINTS FOR ORIGINALITY 

 Mother: Birdy (Deceased) 

 Father: Jack (Deceased) 

 Mate: None 

 Siblings: Poppy (Deceased) 

 Kits: None  

That's good, but names I recomend for future mate and kits are Swift Breeze That Cools Cave, Pool That Ripples In Wind,  Lake That Reflects Stars, and/or Trees That Protect From Rain And Wind. 

I give this OC a 9.5/10. There are some cliche parts but this overall this OC is pretty cool. 


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