Name: Shadeleap

I like the suffix -leap. Shade- is cool, but it is sometimes overused.

Age: I've never really considered it...old, like, ten years old in human...

That is old! Feral cats range from 3 years to around 12! Some kittypets, *clears throat* ahem, house-cats, live till around 20. Sooooo

Appearance: Sleek, skinny, dark-dark-grey tom with cream-colored patches all over (see my art book for a pic) and bright green eyes, also a long furry tail.

Shorten it to skinny very dark gray tom with cream patches all over,bright green eyes, and long furry tail. That's still long! But I can see him in my head...and in your art book.

Clan: ShadowClan

Yay! I like ShadowClan! And RiverClan...And SkyClan..but not ThunderClan or WindClan. (No offense to those who do though!)

Rank: Medicine cat

No comment. Meddie Cats are cool. (Meddie Cat is Fandom Slang for Medicine Cat!)

K/C/M: Yes, he fell in love with a white rogue she-cat named Icicle and she had a kit, who became Shypetal, who Shadeleap "found" and returned to his Clan.

Meh. Cliche, but he's cool. They should just like, burn that rule in the Medicine Cat code.

Personality: Usually crabby and strict, doesn't tolerate troublemakers, but has a soft side for rogues and kits, despite his hatred for apprentices. If you can really get to know him, you can see just a sad, lonely tom with many regrets in his life.

Aww. I want to meet him.

Backstory: As an apprentice, Shadepaw used to meet with a group of rogues and fell in love with their leader, Icicle, while hanging out with them to escape his medicine cat duties. When he was discovered, he was banned from leaving the den until the full moon, and the rogues were chased away. When Shadepaw was out near a cliff one day, he saw a blind rogue kit straying nearby and about to fall off the cliff. Shadepaw leapt over and saved him just in time, earning his medicine cat name, Shadeleap. As he got older, he found his old love, Icicle, dying just outside the territory, with Shadeleap's kit, Shy. Shadeleap attempted to save her but failed, so he regretfully brought the newly named Shykit back to camp. When Shypetal became deputy, Shadeleap was out one day and attacked by a pair of foxes, wounding him terribly. Shypetal found him in time to hear his last words before he left for StarClan forever.

AGAIN THE FEELS! AAAAAAH. 

I give him a 7.8/10. He's cool, but kinda cliche with the strict-hatred-lonely med. cat of ShadowClan thing. Can you write a story about him? Pretty please with a cherry on top? Please DoctorPickles1087?