Sandpaw(eye)

 Sand- is sometimes overused, but -eye is  new. 

I like it.

Tom

Third tom....But toms are good. Toms are chill.

 From LeafClan

Leafclan is cool. I can see them living in like, trees or something. Or in a leafy jungle, and they like, sleep on those giant leaves. Okay, that was weird. 

 He is a black tom with one gray paw and yellow eyes

Sandeye is a good name! But one flaw: If he is black why did his parents name him Sandkit? Was his name diffrent at birth? I have an Oc that was named Pebblekit and then he opened his eyes and they were a peircing, deep, green so they changed his name to Greenkit. Was it like that?

 He is very serious, but playful with his sister and best friend (plus future mate) Graypaw and Moonpaw (Grayfoot and Moonfleck) 

I like the name Grayfoot. But Moonfleck is kinda...just almost Mary-Sueish? I like the suffix -fleck, but maybe change the name to Silverfleck? Or something else? Well, I'm here to judge Sandeye, not Moonfleck.  Sandeye is cool. He seems like the kind who would love kits.

He better love kits.

Backstory: His grandfather fell in love with a rouge, who had kits. She had 4 kits, who all joined one Clan, and had kits. They started destroying the Clans from the inside out, but he met with 4 other cats from all the Clans and eventually stopped it

Is this his story or his grandfathers? I am confuzzled. But, that's cool. I like it. 

Other: His Clan, LeafClan, lives in trees, so naturally, he can climb trees very well.

That's cool! Wait! Does he sleep in trees? Cause that would be AMAZING if he did XD

Sandeye is cool. I like him. He is a 9.5/10. He is amazing. He deserves to be Sandstar of Leafclan.

Yes.Yes, I see it now.