Redblaze/star

Redstar

I like her warrior name, Redblaze. I really do like this, and she seems like she is named after her ginger-red pelt. 

No clue..... Young?

Only problem; Young leaders tend to lead their clan downwards. (Not to name names *coughcoughBrokenstarcoughcoughLeapordstarcoughcoug*) 

Ginger she-cat with white paws.

Maybe make her a dark ginger-red she-cat? 

Personality: Cold, cruel, heartless, a killer.

*looks around* *smiles  evily* FINALLY AN OC THAT IS EVIL! *holds party* *throws confetti* 

SunClan, renamed by Redstar to DeathClan.

Kinda evil sterotype, naming clans after death and crap.

It is all in my book, Blood Washes Her Pelt. But, long story short, she was visited as a kit by the Dark Forest cat Wretchedblaze. Kîlled a denmate, kîlled another cat as an apprentice. Wretchedblaze trains her every night, so she is very strong. Let her leader, Quickstar, diė, so now Twistedstar is leader. Cats keep recieving visions and warnings from StarClan about Redpaw. She gets the warrior name Redblaze, killes more cats. She eventually kīlls Twistedstar, so she becomes deputy. Featherstar sends Redblaze and others to get cats for apprentices, and Redblaze trains Shiningpaw. Redblaze kills Featherstar, becomes Redstar, changes warrior code, changes everything. That is where the story is at, at the moment.

BLOOD!  MORE BLOOD! KILLING! But maybe change Wretchedblaze's name to like, Darkblaze or Hawkflame. I HOPE a mother wouldn't name her kit Wretchedkit. Or maybe his name was like, Glowstorm, and he murdered people (or cats) and they changed his name?

No kits, no mate, future crush Twilightpelt.

I have always been like, half-half on the prefix Twilight-. It seems kinda long, but that's okay. 

Overall, I give Redstar a 7.4/10. There is some little flaws in there, but it's chill. 

It's all chill. 

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