Primroseswipe  

I absoluty love the suffix -swipe. But the prefix, Primrose, is not good. It's too long and makes her sound like a Marysue. 

She-cat 

\ '3'/ SHE-CATS ARE SHE-CATS.

 Red and white tabby with curled ears and a long fluffy tail. Long fur, and golden eyes. (American Curl)

Okay. You mean red as in dark ginger or reddish brown, I assume? I like the curled ears, that's cute. Fluffy tails are a big no-no though, for they are pretty overused. Long fur is too, but I love golden eyes!

 Warrior turned Med Cat

*intense coughing fit* THAT. IS. VERY. OVER-USED. I KNOW ABOUT WHAT I SAID BEFORE. THIS IS VERY OVERUSED IN MAIN OCs. I MEANS AS THEY SAY 'have a paw in two worlds'

 Wolfclan (they live in a large forest, sharing it with a wolf pack (not friendly though))

*thumbs up emoji*

 Quiet, but always takes in information. She has virtually one friend and eavesdrop a lot. Before her death, she wanted to be the best medicine cat ever. She is clumsy, but a good liar. Can't keep secrets though. 

. Quiet is very overused. Add some more flaws and take out the virally one friend thing. That's pretty deppressing.

 Backstory- As a kit, she was ambitious from the start. She was a kittypet,OVERUSED taken in after almost being ran over on a Thunderpath, and none of the other kits wanted to know her.Friendless is big in OCs Her adopted mother, Thrushfang, named her Primrosekit, for her red pelt. As she became an apprentice, she was feeling more and more down, soon only setting her eyes on being the best cat she could, pushing away friends and even her adopted mother. Although, Primrosepaw noticed how unregretful and proud the medicine cat, Pondwave, was. She always watched him. The patient tom was always receiving positive comments from his piers, and she was jealous. By the time she was a warrior, Primroseswipe had begun talking to Pondwave, and eventually became his apprentice and friend, her only friend. Although she was always praised, she still Felt alone, but Pondwave grew to be a father figure to her. Then, on her final day, a battle occurred at the border with Boarclan (temperate rainforest). They attempted to steal land from Wolfclan, and although they failed, many cats from both clans had died. (Here's what happened) Primroseswipe skittered towards her injured clanmate, various herbs in her trembling jaws. But only as she began healing did a sudden blow come from her back. She weakly turned to see a Boarclan cat reared on his hind legs. Another blow came and her legs gave out. She writhed in agony, howling as the vicious tom continue striking her, until her vision went black.

That's new. *OK hand emoji*

OVERALL.

Primroseswipe gets a 7/10. I had to take some points off for cliche parts, her appearence, and her name. Other than that, she's pretty cool!