Moon that sleeps at dawn

I like this name! It makes since with her appearance, and she seems chill 

23 moons

Ages matter.  Nothing is amatter with this age, and all cats are this age at some time!

Cream colored she cat with black spots down back legs, amber eyes

Cream means that she has part kitty-pet blood in her, and the black spots are pretty origanal. Amber eyes are new, and reserved mainly for bad guys. 

Cave guard 

I love Cave Guards. 

Tribe of jagged thorns 

Haven't seen this before!

Bossy, grumpy, caring, nosy, wise, sharp tongue, cautious, shy, sensitive 

She seems cool!

Mother: snow the falls in winter 

Cats do not know what winter is...they call it 'leaf-bare'. Maybe change it to Snow That Falls Quietly, or Snow That Turns Into Ice, or Snow That Hides The Prey

Father: thorn that protects rose

Sister: Sky that's full of stars

Brother: frog that jumps across stream

Mate: Hawk that glides through sky 

Kits: Fog that drifts through forest,Frost that covers snow, Night that wakes the moon

These are so cute!

Moon was born to two rouge cats named snow, and thorn, they loved there life and could not have wished for anything different. But one day there forest home was burnt to the ground and they were forced away.

(* Side Note *) Whisper also had a burnt forest backstory (cliche alert!) and were former rouges. 

After many moons of traveling snow was expecting kits, and if they didn't find a place soon she would be to weak to birth them and she would die. While moon wen rout with her father hunting they stumbled upon a group of cats. One cat named, feather that falls from eagle, told them of there tribe. Thorn was hesitant at first but brought the group of cats to his mate and they were brought to the tribe off jagged thorns. They settled down a few moons later and we're given the names , moon that sleeps at dawn, snow that falls from sky, thorn that protects rose. They loved there new home and soon after snow died giving birth to two kits that were named frog that jumps across river, and sky full of stars. After her mother's death she was saddened but she met a nice tom named, hawk that glides through sky. He helped her see through the grief and she soon became mates with them and had a litter of two kits, fog that drifts through forests, and frost that covers snow, frost was named in honor of her mother and fog in honor of hawks fallen brother forest. Fog and frost one day left camp and we're attacked by a eagle. They were saved from thorn but he lost his life helping them. This made moon sad once again but she soon got o er it with the help of hawk, they had another litter of kits a few moons later but moon was not strong enough and she died just like her mother. Only one kit survived and hawk named it night that wakes the moon, after her mother, no one remembers moon to this day but her memory lives on in her descendants

Origanalish. Some cliche, but good, good. *pats Moon on the head* You have done good.

Moon gets a 9/10. She seems pretty cool. Owlstar-Rippleclan, your OCs are always pretty amazing!