Name: Mistpaw/flower

I like it. Only problem is that -flower is overused for females. I still like it though.

Age: 8 moons (right now)

Okay. Good age for an apprentice!

Appearance: Cloud white she-cat with brown blotches. Has ocean blue eyes

Urm, where did the mist come from? Honestly, I would name her Reedflower, or Cloudflower. Maybe change the brown patches to blue-grey? Because when I read the name I kind of picture a pale gray she-cat with silver, dark gray, and blue-gray dappled she-cat with bright blue eyes. Danng warriors fandom, back at it again with the blue eyes! :l  Like, maybe try green or something.

Personality: Kind, caring, pretty honest, friendly, can be mean in self defense

Typical OC. 

Clan: RiverClan

:D

Mistkit at the time was born thanks to the medicine cat, Aquafrost. If it weren't for her, Mistkit would have been dead. Mistkit was so happy to find how kind this medicine cat was, not knowing that the medicine cat was blind. Mistkit spent all her time as a kit with Aquafrost, and the other kits started making fun of her. But Aquafrost stepped up for Mistkit, and confessed that she was blind. Mistkit was surprised, and ran away from Aquafrost. After a while of running and having a stream of tears flowing behind her, Mistkit stopped running. She didn't know that she was on WindClan territory, until WindClan's deputy found her and asked her what she was doing there. Mistkit apologized, and asked where RiverClan was. The deputy lead her back to RiverClan, and Aquafrost was the first to greet her. Time went by, and Mistkit became friends with Aquafrost again. One day, she went to the leader and asked him if she could be a medicine cat apprentice,and the leader said yes. After that, Mistpaw has been following the medicine cat code, even if it meant killing herself, but she would never. Ever. Have a mate. After Mistpaw's father died, Aquafrost stood by her and helped her get through the pain

aaaaaawwwwwwwww.

K/M/C: None, but future mate (from the pain of losing Aquafrost) the leader of WindClan (and in this backstory, it was the deputy

Ugh. Almost a typical,cliche, warrior. 

Honestly, this cat is a cliche and overused. No offense, but Mistflower kinda is. Sorry to say, but I give her a 6.2/10.