Name: Lilyleaf

Oooh! I've always loved the prefix Lily-, and -leaf is very overused, but it sounds so cool with this prefix!

Age: 20 Moons

Nice age.

M/K/C?: Crush on Mapleberry

Can't stop laughing (no offense) but it's a tom named Mapleberry! It just sounds kind of like a..she-cat!

Backstory: She appeared. Nobody knows why, but she did. They are all still suspicious, but she fights to prove her loyalty everyday.

Oki-doki. Nice. Vauge, but creative. 

Other: legends say she was a reincarnation of a tribe cat from long ago

That's very origanal! Like Jayfeather (Jay's Wing) Lionblaze (Lion's Roar), and Dovewing (Dove's Wing). Many fanfics never touch this, but you did and it's well....AMAZING!

I have no personality...?

Very vauge, but this is creative. A little more work and you have a perfect OC!

7.8/10