Name: Lightsplash 

Light- is VERY overused for most main charactors. I have to take points off. But -splash is pretty underused, and is one of my favorite suffixes. 

Sex: Male

Nice *thumbs up emoji* 

Role: Deputy

Lovin' them deputys.

K/M/C?: He has a crush on Newtberry, a cream colored she cat with scorching orange eyes bright as the sun

Adorbs name. Also, cream means she has kittypet blood.

Age: 500 moons, just kidding 30 moons

*almost has intense heart-attack* I read it and was like HOLY CRAP HE'S AAAANNNNCCCCIIIIEEEENT. But 30 moons is good. 

Description: solid white tom with splashes and streaks of cream colors. This tom has a blue eye and a brown-ish grey eye, but is not blind.

Solid white is pretty oversued. Lovin' the streaks of cream. But the two diffrent colored eyes are pretty cliche and basically screams "I'M THE MAIN CHARACTOR LOOK AT ME!"

Personality: He is the type of cat you'd think would be useless because he has one paw smaller than the other and no tail, and a missing ear, but he was born like this. He was casted aside in the litter but a Denmate and former queen Nettlesting fed and made sure he was treated equally, just as every other cat. This made him very strong-headed and ambitious, soon making him a feirce warrior, but he wasn't treacherous, and he earned his spot as deputy. He does have a sour tongue, and often gets in quarrels.

This is cute. Also he seems good with his balenced flaws and not flaws.

Clan: ShadowClan

HOW CAN YOU MAKE YOUR OC SO EVIL? SO COLD-HEARTED? SO BLOOD-THIRSTY?

DOES HE WORSHIP THE DARK FOREST?

JK. I love ShadowClan and Tall Shadow.

.Backstory: Lightkit, the misfit of the litter, was casted aside and cared for by Nettlesting, a queen at the time, when named an apprentice, they changed his name to Dungpaw as punishment and cruel taunting for his misshaped body. Soon after a horrible 17 moons of extra training, StarClan sent a horrible death to Beetlestar, the one who insisted on breaking the warrior code by not only keeping him an apprentice, but killed and ate kits from other Clans when prey was scarce, and made it seem like 'Dungpaw' had killed them out of anger. The fate was in his sleep, the mother of the leader came from above and killed him, and Dungpaw witnessed it. Soon after that the deputy and now leader, Strawstar, changed his name from Dungpaw to Lightsplash, and appointed him deputy as an apology for all the torment. Lightsplash had also been told he had seen all that had happened. Strawstar promised he wasn't appointed because of pity, but because he had suffered the most and still stayed strong and loyal, and he couldn't have asked for a better deputy.

Beetlestar is purely evil for being a fricken cannibal. At first when you said Strawstar, I saw a cat with a neck as a bendy straw. Other than that, he seems chill. BUT IF HE IS DEPUTY.

WHERE IS HIS APPRENTICE?

*dun-dun-duuh music plays* 

Also, Beetle- is a sterotypical evil cat name. Maybe change it to like, Shadestar, Snowstar, Nightstar, or Silverstar? Something a little less, evil. 

Overall, I give Lightsplash a 7/10. I have to take off a point for the overused prefix and the appearence. Other than that, you have a solid OC!