Grassnewt
Name: Grassnewt
Grass- is pretty underused and -newt is new and cute.
Gender: tom
Lovin' these toms.
Appearance : light brown tabby Tom with dark brown speckles on his back legs. He has hazel eyes.
He sounds cute! And you mean hazel, like brown, or blue-green-golden-brown? Which one? Both are super pretty, but hazel blue-green-golden-brown is prettier.
Clan: RiverClan
HEY HE'S MY HOMIE! WELCOME TO THE CAMP!
Rank: warrior
Warriors are cool.
Personality: has a love of newts and tall grass. He is odd, but sweet. He is almost always happy, but when you make him mad its a nightmare.
Not seeing very many flaws. Other than that, he seems pretty new. I like him!
Backstory: as a kit, he would play with the small newts and lizards by the nursery. Many judged him for this, but when he became a great warrior they were shocked! He soon met Willowstream, and had two toms and a she-cat. The oldest Tom, Oakkit was taken by a twoleg and never seen again. The family was devastated, but have learned to stay strong. They now live a happy life.
I really like this OC! It's cool that he's not a prochey cat, or super important. I love the name Willowstream! It sounds so pretty!
Mother: flowerpelt (deceased)
Father: Oakstorm
Mate: Willowstream
Siblings: applefeather
Kits: Oakkit (decseased)Birdpaw (she-cat) Falconpaw (tom)
I recomend names for Birdpaw and Falconpaw. Birdpool and Falconstep. I like the names you chose!
OVERALL. I give this adorable OC a 8.4/10. Flaws, but some of the things aren't super origanal. I also super-duper love his name-GRASSNEWT- he should really be GrassSTAR!
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