Grassnewt

Name: Grassnewt 

Grass- is pretty underused and -newt is new and cute.

Gender: tom

Lovin' these toms.

Appearance : light brown tabby Tom with dark brown speckles on his back legs. He has hazel eyes.

He sounds cute! And you mean hazel, like brown, or blue-green-golden-brown? Which one? Both are super pretty, but hazel blue-green-golden-brown is prettier.

 Clan: RiverClan

HEY HE'S MY HOMIE! WELCOME TO THE CAMP!

 Rank: warrior 

Warriors are cool.

Personality: has a love of newts and tall grass. He is odd, but sweet. He is almost always happy, but when you make him mad its a nightmare.

Not seeing very many flaws. Other than that, he seems pretty new. I like him!

 Backstory: as a kit, he would play with the small newts and lizards by the nursery. Many judged him for this, but when he became a great warrior they were shocked! He soon met Willowstream, and had two toms and a she-cat. The oldest Tom, Oakkit was taken by a twoleg and never seen again. The family was devastated, but have learned to stay strong. They now live a happy life. 

I really like this OC! It's cool that he's not a prochey cat, or super important. I love the name Willowstream! It sounds so pretty!

Mother: flowerpelt (deceased)

 Father: Oakstorm 

Mate: Willowstream 

Siblings: applefeather 

Kits: Oakkit (decseased)Birdpaw (she-cat) Falconpaw (tom)

I recomend names for Birdpaw and Falconpaw. Birdpool and Falconstep. I like the names you chose!


OVERALL. I give this adorable OC a 8.4/10. Flaws, but some of the things aren't super origanal. I also super-duper love his name-GRASSNEWT- he should really be GrassSTAR! 


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