Name: Dreamsplash 

Dreamsplash. Dream- is pretty overused and used for mainly she-cats, so go gender equility? And again, I personally love the suffix -splash. 

Gender: Tom 

YAY GENDER DIVERSATY! Also, my second tom in a row.

 Appearance: A thick furred yellowish ginger tabby, with a white streak down his back, as well as white paws, ears, and tail tip. 

Aw. He sounds cute. I like this.

 Clan: TyphoonClan (I tried to think of a name for RiverClan but failed) 

Cats have no clue what Typhoons are. Maybe try RippleClan, SplashClan, or WaveClan? Maybe something like ReedClan or TroutClan? BeachClan? 

 Rank: Warrior 

Warriors are good. I like them.

 Personality: Hot Headed, quiet, stealthy, easy to anger etc 

Etc? Okay. He seems cool. 

 Back story: When Dreamsplash was Dreamkit, he had multiple traumatic events. His mother was killed by force of impact when a twoleg saw her and the medicine cat on their way to Moon Pool. (The twoleg kicked her in the head, basically) His father was basically an alcoholic and a drug addict. He always looked for certain medicine cat herbs, such as catmint. He was said to leave the Clan after he basically murdered someone by taking the herbs they needed in order to fight GreenCough. He was adopted by a nursing queen, who named him Dreamkit, for his ability to sleep through everything. He grew up being friends with Sunfeather and such, got unearthly abilities to turn onto a Sharp Tooth like being in dreams, and was murdered by his clan blah blah blah

Okay. This might seem rude and long. I'm sorry Dawnrise. 

At first I liked it with his mother dying on her way to the moonpool, with the two leg kicking her in the head. But then his father. Why is he an alcoholic? Also, he's a cat. And a drug addict? That's kind of not..not realistic. And the Sharp Tooth thing is crazy and why was he murdered by his clan? If you give me more detail I might rate him again. 

 Mom: Wrenfoot/star

Wren- is cool. I like this name. 

 Dad: Bushpool 

Bush- is new. -pool is not.

 Mate: Stoneheart, Lichenclaw 

Why does he have two mates? 

 Siblings: None 

 Kits: None

This OC is kinda a cliche and not very well thought out. I like this OC. But sadly I have to give him a 7.2/10 for his not very well thought out parts.