Clan Name: TornadoClan. Cool! Except, warriors don't really know what Tornados are. They'd probably call them Whirlwinds, or Windstorms if they ever came across one. 

Clan name reasoning: the three clan cats that started it were from MoorClan, they were on a mission and when they came close a tornado was storming the camp. So it was named TornadoClan as a memory for all the dead cats. Okay, but again with the fact that Tornados aren't a known disaster for Warriors.

Clan territory: they live on the side of a mountain. Beside that mountain is a forest. The clan trains apprentices in the SunCave, which is a cave in the mountains with holes in the top to let sunlight in. They hunt in the forest, which is rich in prey. There is the RockFalls which most cats are told to stay away from unless getting the herbs that grow there as it is surrounded by rocks that will crash down every so often.  Okay. Is the camp a hole in the mountain, a hollow, or what? 

Clan camp: they have their camp at the mountainside, which is surrounded by sturdy rocks. There was a ledge with a bunch of large rocks scattered on it that led to a cave which is where the leader sleeps and the ledge is the RockyLedge where meetings are called. Under the RockyLedge there is another cave, where the medicine den is. Then there were two more caves that became the nursery and the elder's den. The warrior's den and the apprentice den were made by weaving dens between large rocks.  Alright! Some more details like the Preypile, the nests, different small landmarks, etc would be nice. 

Clan members:

Leader: Wolfstar- a gray tabby she-cat with white paws, ear tips, tail tip, belly, and chest and blue eyes. Okay! Her name suits her. 

Deputy: Shadowrunner- a long-limbed black tom with amber eyes. Cool.

Apprentice: Spiderpaw. Alright.

Medicine cat: Dawnsnarl: a ginger and brown tabby she-cat with blue eyes Nice, but snarl usually doesn't fit a healer well, as a suffix. They're healers, and snarl is quite a violent word. But, that's okay! 

Warriors:

 Fang: a black and white tabby tom with blue eyes. Alright.

Flowerheart: a white she with brown tabby splotches and lilac eyes. Cool. 

Lightpelt: a yellow tabby tom with white paws and amber eyes. Nice.

Heather: a brown she with blue eyes. I get that some cats might be kitty pets or loners who joined the Clan, but why don't they have Clan names? Sure, one or two cats might keep their origin names, but scrolling down, half of the Clan still have Loner/Kittypet names.  

Hornet: a golden tom with black stripes and amber eyes. Cool, his name suits him. 

Citrineheart: a golden tabby she-cat with white paws, tail tip, chest, and belly and green eyes. I like Citrine as a prefix. 

Apprentice: Windpaw. Cool. 

Birdshade: a black and brown she with blue eyes. Alright!

Claw: a black tom with yellow eyes. Cool. 

Apprentices:

Spiderpaw: a brown and black tabby tom with amber eyes. He sounds physically a lot like Spiderleg from the main series. 

Windpaw: a brown she with black markings and amber eyes. Cool. 

Queens:

Fogpelt: a light gray tabby she-cat with blue eyes (expecting Claw's kits) Cute. 

Elders: they have not at the moment because they are such a new clan. Alright, that makes sense. 

Clan lore: Wolfbreeze belonged to a clan named MoorClan. But one day Shadowrunner, Dawnpaw (medicine cat, now Dawnsnarl), and she was out on a long journey that is taken every year (most times with some younger warriors unless there are none fit). The Clan had died in a tornado. Most bodies weren't found. But a few cats had serious injuries that they were hardly hanging on. Everyone but the three died. They were rouges for a while before StarClan came to Wolfbreeze, telling her if she did not create a new clan StarClan would fade away. So she found as many rouges, loners, and Kittypets as she could and created a Clan, TornadoClan. Some cats were angry that Wolfstar and her mate, Shadowrunner, had all the power. So they left and found cats to join their own clans. Although the clans are small all are strong. So far they haven't done anything yet but Wolfstar has her cats ready in case they do, especially ready for if the bloodthirsty ScarClan attacks. Why were they on a long journey? Why do they have to do it every year, and what was the purpose? 

Clan skills: they are good with long walks, climbing, and fighting on uneven ground such as a Mountains. Okay. 

 Demenor: they are known to be a peaceful clan. They let all cats in need in the clan. It may make them look weak but if you go into a battle with them they will fight as fiercely as ScarClan. Okay. "Peaceful until a fight happens, then very fierce," is quite a common trope among Clans. 

Clan's favourite prey: squirrels and hawks when they can catch them. Okay. 

Unique assets: all cats will learn how to hunt hawks or fight them off. Apprentices can not leave camp on their own or become warriors until they do so. As well as a part of their Warrior assessment they must win a fight with a mentor. That's cool! Kind of like the Tribe of Rushing Water.

Other Clans around them: ScarClan, led by the bloodthirsty Bloodstar they are always finding a reason to fight another Clan even if the other Clan didn't do anything. SnakeClan led by the sneaky Alderstar is normally awake at night and quieter than a mouse and swifter than snakes. Lastly, ValleyClan led by the kind-hearted Lightningstar they are the only Clan that is not constantly looking for trouble and is named for the territory they live in. A Bloodthirsty Clan led by a cat named Bloodstar sounds so 2010, edgy-evil, slightly Mary-Sue OC. Something out of a Scourge's son/daughter fanfic? I'M SORRY- NOT TRYING TO BE MEAN-

Overall, TornadoClan has some flaws that probably should be worked out! But, they've got a solid start, and for that, they get a 6.9/10. Thanks for submitting!