Clan name: MidnightClan. Cool! An interesting name. I have a cat named Midnight. 

Clan Name Reasoning: They are only awake from dusk to dawn. Cool, and pretty unique. It makes sense, seeing as cats are normally mostly nocturnal. 

Territory: Thick woodland with many volcanic rocks and ledges spread around from a volcano eruption. Lots more detail is needed. That's a good start, and it sounds like an interesting place, but it's lacking. 

Special places:

Training grounds: A large dusty clearing with some obstacles that haven't ben cleared. Alright.

Sunning place: a large smooth rock where warriors and apprentices go when they are done with training or hunting. Cool. 

Camp: A large ravine with some small trees and ledges. Again, lots more detail is needed. And this sounds very similar to ThunderClan's camp. 

Leaders den: A crevice in the rock with a small stream running around it. Okay. 

Warriors den: A large ledge with bramble and lavender bushes protecting it from rain and snow and heat. Alright, nice. 

Apprentices den: A crevice in a ledge with lichen covering it. Cool. 

Nursery: A thick woven bramble wall covering a large crevice. Nice. 

Elder den: A small ledge with lavender and bramble brush over it. Okay. 

Med cat den: A large crevice in the wall and has a bramble screen. Alright.

For the whole camp and territory, the formatting was pretty off. I'd like it to all be in one paragraph, in the future. And more detail is needed; How's the vegetation in and around the camp and territory? Larger landmarks? Borders? Nests, and camp description besides den? 

Members:Leader: Tallstar (Brown tom with dark amber eyes and tall legs. Okay. You're probably aware that there's a cat named Tallstar in the real books. And it's okay to have background characters with cannon names, but for someone as big and important as the leader, you'd want something unique. 

Deputy: Darkfeather (Black she-cat with midnight blue eyes) Alright. 

Med-cat: Flameleaf (Bright ginger tabby she-cat) Cute. 

Important Warriors:

Petalpelt: Cream she-cat (Saved leader from falling rocks crushing her tail as a result) I had a cat in a Clangen game named Petalpelt :)

Sharpwave: Dark gray tom (Fought off fox) Okay. 

Important Elders: Whiteear: White she-cat ( saved kits from a rouge) Cool. 

Clan lore: Long ago a cat rebelled from her clan. Shardpelt had had enough of the crouped clan code the leaders had created and decided to create her own Clan. She had found many cats from the other clans who wanted to join almost all the cats had kits and made the clan bigger. The Clan was formed at Midnight of the old clans. Quite a typical backstory for a Clan. Cat doesn't like the way their Clan is, splits, and makes their own. I've seen it many times before. And I'm a bit confused by the last sentence. What does it mean, 'Formed at Midnight of the old Clans"? 

Clan skills: They are known for their fast thinking and incredible hunting skills. I'd think they'd also have good night vision, seeing as they are nocturnal. 

Clan demenor: They seem dark and evil but you get to know them and they are super kind!!  Okay...? Why do they seem evil? From what I've seen they have no brutal tactics, no unfair rules, no terribly out-of-line practices, and a normal environment. It's very stereotypical to have them seem "evil" Just because they're nocturnal. That's also just a very common trope. 

 Favorite prey: they enjoy mice and birds. Fair. 

Other Clans: They are pretty far but the closest ones are the old clans. And the old Clans are just ThunderClan, ShadowClan, etc? Elaborate. 

Rules: No fighting between clanmates (Unless training)and just the clan code. Fair, but a bit basic; surely you could find some more rules to add in, to make it unique? 

Overall, MidnightClan has an okay start but needs quite a bit of work. There's a lot lacking, especially in terms of setting and lore. But with some work, it could be really good! For now, they get a 5/10.