Winkingeye

Name: Winkingeye. Very unique! I don't think I've ever seen 'Winking' used as a prefix! 

Past names: Winkingkit, Winkingpaw. Alright.

Clan: RiverClan. Cool, it's always nice to see a RiverClan OC! 

Gender: she-cat. Okay.

Sexuality: straight. Alright!

Appearance: a calico she-cat with one blue eye. Her other eye never opened and she has short fur. First, this could use some more details. Does she have any particularly odd/unique markings? Ear size, scars, tail length, etc. Second, I would think her eye would have to open at some point, even if it turned out to be useless/an empty socket. Unless her eye never developed at all, and there was just a solid piece of skin where the socket would be, it would, inevitably have to open. Correct me if I'm wrong, though.

Personality: she is nice to most kits and loves making friends but she works harder than she should because she hates it when cats underestimate her. She use to overwork herself as an apprentice, afraid that others will think she couldn't do as much as them. She is normally on high alert, scaring easily. She sounds very sweet, and her personality is quite balanced. 

Mate: Dewleaf (gray tabby tom with blue eyes, owned by a friend in a roleplay). Okay!

Kits: none yet. Will she have any in the future?

Kin: Fallendawn (father, a white tom with ginger-brownish patches and blue eyes) Sungaze (mother, a ginger tabby she with amber eyes) No siblings? 

Future death: poisoned. Poor thing! How, or who poisoned her? 

Rank at death: senior warrior. Okay.

Past ranks: apprentice, kit. Alright.

Good traits: determined, kind, out-going, adventurous. Normal.

Bad traits: easily scared, overworks herself, cares what other cats think about her. Balanced here too!

Hunting: 8/10

Fighting: 7.5/10

Swimming: 9.5/10

Climbing: 1/10

Leadership skills: 6/10

Reputation: 8/10

A tad bit high.  

Likes: hunting, hanging out with her mate, exploring. Fair enough. 

Dislikes: fighting, heights, her parents (to a point) What'd her parents do? 

Scars: she has a few scars on her back and legs from battles. Okay. I would also consider her eye a scar/injury/permanent condition.

Backstory: Her father left her as a kit as he was a perfectionist and hated that his only kit had an imperfection. Her mother blamed her and always brought her down. Oh, poor baby

As an apprentice, she met her father again and he finally wanted to get to know her. But he died from a fox attacking him and Winkingeye (paw at the time). Soon after she met Dewpaw, who moved to the Clan. They became friends and after a while got their warrior names. Did Dewpaw move from another Clan, was he a loner/kittypet, etc? 

 They became mates after Dewleaf fell out of a tree and Winkingeye got so scared she told him. They lived happily for a while but once Winkingeye was around 80 moons old she was poisoned by a death berry in her prey (how it go there is still a mystery) and sadly passed away. That's quite sad! Who would do that to her?

Overall, Winkingeye is a unique, and balanced OC! I could hardly find anything wrong or lacking in her characeter, or story. She gets a 9/10! Thank you so much for submitting. 

Bonus: What I think she looks like (Sorry, couldn't find one with a missing eye!)

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