Sunflower
Name: Sunflower. Aww, that's a really cute name! I don't know what it is with flower names and cats, but I love them.
Past Names: Sun. Alright!
Clan: Loner. Cool, I assumed so, due to the name.
Past Clans: None. Okay!
Gender: Male. Cool.
Sexuality: Nonbinary. Okay, cool!
Appearance: Sunflower is a skinny and small gray cat. They have pale yellow splotches scattered around their body. They have a heart-shaped splotch on their chest, and a small splotch above the left side of their mouth, looking like half a moustache. They are polydactyl (they have six toes) on their back right paw. They have golden yellow eyes, and slightly large ears. They have short fur and pinkish-red skin. VERY descriptive! I love it! His name fits his appearance quite well, and the addition of polydactyly is really cool.
Personality: Sunflower is a kind and caring cat, but can be somewhat overdramatic and whiny. They are normally very neat and organized and has major OCD. They are very polite around other cats, and helps anyone in need, though they are a bit too trusting. Quite balanced, and well-put-together.
Mate: None. Alright.
Kits: None. Okay!
Other family/ kin: Doe (small light brown she-cat, mother), Moth (average sized gray she-cat, sister) What about a father? Other than that, looks good.
Cause of future death: Being tricked into eating death berries. Who tricked him into eating death berries?!
Rank at death: Loner, around old, but not quite senior, warrior age. Alright, cool!
Past ranks: None. Not much to say here.
Good traits: kind, caring, polite, helpful. Quite balanced, and fair!
Bad traits: OCD, whiny, overdramatic, very trusting. Balanced here too.
Hunting: 7/10
Fighting: 3/10 (they're a pacifist)
Swimming: 1/10
Climbing: 8/10
Leadership skills: 5/10 (he has the right traits, but doesn't see himself as one)
Reputation: 7/10 among other rogues and loners, and 3/10 among Clan cats, he doesn't really interact with them much
Okay, balanced here too! So far, this OC is very balanced.
Likes: Hunting, flowers, other cats. Okay, cool.
Dislikes: Fighting, foxes (more detail in the backstory), loneliness, getting sick. Normal things to dislike!
Backstory: Sunflower, then Sun, was born to his mother Doe along with his sister Moth. Sun and Moth loved to play together, and we're very competitive. One day, when Sun was around apprentice age, Doe got bitten by a fox, hours later, she started foaming at the mouth and seeing things that weren't there. She died in the night. Sun and Moth gave their mother a burial, then decided to go off and find a new home. One day, a few moons later they came across Twolegs. Sun ran, but Moth was paralyzed by fear and was taken by the Twolegs. Sun later adopted the name Sunflower after coming across a sunflower field a few days after Moth was taken. Sunflower eventually found a home in a tree hollow a few tail lengths above the ground where they now live. They are on very good terms with other cats but aren't really friends with any of them. Okay! I've never seen Rabies included in a story before. Very interesting! But it could use a bit of expansion, like an explanation to who poisoned him with Deathberries. Other than that, it's pretty good!
Alright, Sunflower is a very well-rounded, well-thought-out OC. He's quite unique, and I like him a lot. He gets a solid 9/10. Thank you so much for submitting, and sorry it took so long!
Bonus: What I think he looks like:
(Sorry, this was the closest I could find! I know if doesn't match up perfectly, but yeah.)
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